Hi,

 

I have made a landing page at https://www.medicalstudieseurope.co.uk/landing/ and would like feedback on it before putting it live on it's own domain. What rooms for improvement are there and how can I make it more lead capturing?

 

Thanks.

have a look throught these 12 videos http://unbounce.com/lp-sessions/all-episodes/

 

the background makes the text to hard to read

 

study in europe is far too vague study what and where and why ? what's in it for me?

same as contact us - what do i get if i contact you? contact you about what?

 

the CTA visit the main site comes straight after the contact us CTA (call to action) - if you need a link to the site put it in the footer. there should be one focused purpose for a landing page

Get rid of the background. It dates the site back to 1990.

 

Get rid of the animation in the header.

 

Left justify the content. Drop all the red highlights.

 

What is the purpose of the page? Why is there a lot of unfinished content below the fold?

 

How are you marketing this page?

 

There are no contact details or trust marks on the page

 

There are no details about the courses on offer. The FAQs don't need to toggle, just put them on the page in plain text.

 

It's a nothing page, by that I mean there is no real content and a lack of purpose.

It would be good to have an arrow or some other symbol on the accordion, to indicate it can be clicked on. Otherwise it looks like headings with no content.

Hi,

 

While I am making modifications on the current one what is your opinion on this one: http://www.medistudy.co.uk/index_shivam.html

 

and where can that one be improved? Note that the other pages in the navbar aren't ready yet.

as a start i think you need to change the background