Hi. I'm not a graphic designer by trade but would love to have some feedback on a banner ad I've been asked to produce.

 

It's for accommodation in a Country House, targeting mostly short-let corporate style clients.

 

Please vote and provide feedback here; http://designvote.io/Vote/sp236wQRc4o1

 

Thank you,

 

Dan

Yep, me too.

Voted

Thanks to everyone that's voted so far. I really appreciate the feedback.

 

Dan

the kerning/tracking is a touch tight in places e-.g. "country house" (in the second banner, which is the better of the two)

 

but nicely done

Edited June 23, 201511 yr by dap

Thanks dap. You're spot on there. I'll tart it up.

Hi. I'm not a graphic designer by trade but would love to have some feedback on a banner ad I've been asked to produce.

 

It's for accommodation in a Country House, targeting mostly short-let corporate style clients.

 

Please vote and provide feedback here; http://designvote.io/Vote/sp236wQRc4o1

 

Thank you,

 

Dan

Nice, voted

Done....