Hi

 

Can you please review this design? (The website isn't ready yet. The URL name isn't the definitive one.)

 

There is a homepage (with slider), sample page (with comments) and a product catalog. I tried to make it responsive (but that could use some improvement)

 

In the beginning of designing this (WordPress) website, I liked it, but now it seems something's wrong, is missing ... But I don't know what...

 

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Thanks

 

PS.: please don't pay attention to the little icons that aren't loading...

Edited July 28, 201313 yr by MaryGold

Looks good on iPhone but with the navigation drop down I would change that to a width of 80-90% so it isn't hitting the sides.

And what do you think of the design itself and the catalog (on PC)?

And what do you think of the design itself and the catalog (on PC)?

 

I'll be happy to provide some feedback, but right now the website isn't loading, have you taken it off?

I would change the yellow background to more of a pinkish white/light grey as the color looks out of place with the color scheme with the rest of the site maybe a color like #fee

Edited July 31, 201313 yr by D4Y0

I would change the yellow background to more of a pinkish white/light grey as the color looks out of place with the color scheme with the rest of the site maybe a color like #fee

 

What URL are you using? I can't seem to connect to it.

http://sims3dawnallure.hostingsiteforfree.com/publichtml/

It's nice design, but you put so many sale links on the left, but many of them aren't working ( I mean it says there are no search results), so maybe put there only valid sale offers