April 2, 201511 yr Please kindly review my ecommerce website, if it would persuade you to either purchase the item, or at least prompt them to seek further information. https://cst8267-olan0002.myshopify.com
April 2, 201511 yr Did you code the theme yourself or just you buy and apply? To be quite honest... I wouldn't buy because there isn't much info given on the products themselves. On design, the footer is nice, but the masthead needs a lot of help. The logo needs to be redone to something a lot more professional. The search/cart/navigation need to be integrated together more. You nav is so low on the page it gives it a real amature feel to it (and thats never good in an online shop). It makes the site feel untrustworthy. The nav also needs a new design. That whole section is really plain and doesn't do anything to get me excited about the product. The contact and support link should be on the footer IMO, You never really see ecommercial sites have their support on their main header. You don't want to make users feel like its something they are going to need a lot (because of a bad product). Not sure about the blog either. I don't go to stores to read a blog. Thats your own choice, but I wouldn't expect a lot of traffic there so it may be wasted energy trying to keep that up. Your 3 products on the home page makes me think that that is all you have, It wasn't until I clicked the products page (something I wouldn't normally do because of my previous comment) I noticed that you had more product. Overall other than the footer, the layout needs to have some thought put into it. It needs some color as visually its boring.
April 2, 201511 yr Did you code the theme yourself or just you buy and apply? To be quite honest... I wouldn't buy because there isn't much info given on the products themselves. On design, the footer is nice, but the masthead needs a lot of help. The logo needs to be redone to something a lot more professional. The search/cart/navigation need to be integrated together more. You nav is so low on the page it gives it a real amature feel to it (and thats never good in an online shop). It makes the site feel untrustworthy. The nav also needs a new design. That whole section is really plain and doesn't do anything to get me excited about the product. The contact and support link should be on the footer IMO, You never really see ecommercial sites have their support on their main header. You don't want to make users feel like its something they are going to need a lot (because of a bad product). Not sure about the blog either. I don't go to stores to read a blog. Thats your own choice, but I wouldn't expect a lot of traffic there so it may be wasted energy trying to keep that up. Your 3 products on the home page makes me think that that is all you have, It wasn't until I clicked the products page (something I wouldn't normally do because of my previous comment) I noticed that you had more product. Overall other than the footer, the layout needs to have some thought put into it. It needs some color as visually its boring. Just spam to try and get back links, in my mind..
April 2, 201511 yr Author Thanks for the feedback, I got the theme for free and all I did was to add the bottom navigation. I will move things around but limited in some places. Thanks once again.
April 16, 201511 yr The "Easy delivery to West Africa" is not a good start. Doesn't look very professional. The logo could be better. It makes me question the professionalism of it which isn't a good sign. You need separate Contact Us, Support, News and Blog buttons. Filming Photography Surveillance should be more prominent. You should take the photo slide show out and have a page or Pinterest site dedicated to that. I think you could do well on Pinterest as it is so visual. About Us content could be more convincing. I liked the blog post. I think that is where your market is as you have a great story to tell with those drones. I run a content writing company so could help you there with some advice. I think you need to make more of your video and probably dedicate a large part of the site to video as that is what sells your product. Shop looks good and clean and simple. The video looks funny stuck int he bottom right column. Over it needs just a bit of work from a design a suer point of view.
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