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criticism wanted

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What do you all reckon?

 

win or fail?

 

Not 100% happy with my elephant, rushed him a little and some bits suck, dont really have the time at the moment to fix it though.

Certainly an arresting image and good colour. I might work on the copy in the centre to make it equally impactful. Is this a print ad or online?

 

cheers

 

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St Albans Web Design

Web Design, Development and Email Marketing

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print ad, rendered the elephant to a3 size just in case. kept my bedroom supercomputer busy for 10 minutes :D

 

Copy isnt nailed down yet.

  • 2 weeks later...

looks good, i like it. Would certainly grab my attention if it was in a mag.

I love it.

What software did you use for to create this funny animal?

2 thumbs up, its certainly eye catching!

 

 

Kyle

Elephant is terrific but the background behind him is completely flat.. It seems like he's floating in the mid-air..

I would put some shadows beneath this white "base" + behind jumbo24.co.uk sign..

and maybe a gradient on the background wouldn't be such a bad idea?

 

but that just my suggestions :pp nice job anyway ;)

  • 3 weeks later...
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Was asked to re-visit this and 'jazz' it up ((i hate phrases like that...grr)

 

nelly was modelled/textured and rendered in cinema4d

What is that horrible orange box there for may i ask? Other than that it is looking very nice!

  • 2 weeks later...

overall looks good, but the eyes of the elephant look weird, donno why.

and yeah, that orange box isn't good.

I did an awesome job in there.

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