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My first ever client site!

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the farm market displays a bit off in chrome, i think all you need to do is clear the floats though.

 

add clear:both to the image, other than that it all displays fine in chrome (: looks fine in FF, not bothered with IE, i'm sure you have anyway.

 

Validates (mostly). you've used _ which doesn't validate, but that's negligible.

 

not gone into much detail, but initial impressions, it's good.

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the farm market displays a bit off in chrome, i think all you need to do is clear the floats though.

 

add clear:both to the image, other than that it all displays fine in chrome (: looks fine in FF, not bothered with IE, i'm sure you have anyway.

Ok, will get on this ASAP. Thanks for bringing this to my attention.

 

Validates (mostly). you've used _ which doesn't validate, but that's negligible.

 

not gone into much detail, but initial impressions, it's good.

 

Oh mierda! I meant to make it validate all around. Forgot about the target..

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bocaj, I just revalidated the page with the

target="_top"

and it validates. No errors, no warnings, so I guess it's good. :)

First, your website passes XHTML 1.1 validation...which is good. For me, the website is too simple and lack gradients and other effects. Personally, I don't like to see plain links as navbar items; it looks too generic. I'm also not a fan of the overall layout of the webpage as I think information of your webpage can be express a little better. On a positive note, I do love your color choice for this website. I think you need to work on the design concepts though.

 

Hope I helped

must just be my html tidy thing, i've used _blank before and that's always flagged up errors for me. I thought the _ was a disallowed character or something?

 

Edit: i was using an sgml parser, that's why it flagged up.

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must just be my html tidy thing, i've used _blank before and that's always flagged up errors for me. I thought the _ was a disallowed character or something?

 

It validates so I guess not, lol. :lol:

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First, your website passes XHTML 1.1 validation...which is good. For me, the website is too simple and lack gradients and other effects. Personally, I don't like to see plain links as navbar items; it looks too generic. I'm also not a fan of the overall layout of the webpage as I think information of your webpage can be express a little better. On a positive note, I do love your color choice for this website. I think you need to work on the design concepts though.

 

Hope I helped

 

Thanks for your comments. :)

 

Complexity isn't always the best route ;)

Still need to sort out the farm market page as the content is still being pushed off the page (Safari) although now sure if you've attempted fixing it yet. Other than that, it's an ok layout. Add the necessary finishes and it should be fine.

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Still need to sort out the farm market page as the content is still being pushed off the page (Safari) although now sure if you've attempted fixing it yet. Other than that, it's an ok layout. Add the necessary finishes and it should be fine.

 

 

Working on sorting it out now, thanks for pointing out the safari thing. :)

Thanks for your comments. :)

 

Complexity isn't always the best route ;)

 

You're right. I simple website can still be a good one. ;)

on the farm market page, the link to "pie list" throws a 404...

 

in the opening paragraphs, you've used a <br /> to space them, I'd advise using padding-bottom or margin-bottom for this effect.

 

 

Coding looks nice and clean though, well commented and indented :)

 

Oh, one more thing, your header image has an alt description of header. Not very helpful, and a waste of potential keyword space mate :)

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Farm market page displays fine now ^_^

 

Yup! :D Thanks to your notice it has been fixed!

 

 

on the farm market page, the link to "pie list" throws a 404...

 

in the opening paragraphs, you've used a <br /> to space them, I'd advise using padding-bottom or margin-bottom for this effect.

 

 

Coding looks nice and clean though, well commented and indented :)

 

Oh, one more thing, your header image has an alt description of header. Not very helpful, and a waste of potential keyword space mate :)

 

Hmm.. Would you please enlighten me as to why I would put more than just "Header" in the alt tag? :pp

 

Sorry, not great at SEO! :lol:

In my opinion, the site looks fine. I am not an expert in coding but the codes looked ok with me. The design is simple and gets the message out clearly to the visitor which is good and I think suits your target audience. thanks.

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In my opinion, the site looks fine. I am not an expert in coding but the codes looked ok with me. The design is simple and gets the message out clearly to the visitor which is good and I think suits your target audience. thanks.

 

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

 

Site was meant to be simple, but functional so we have succeeded! :D

I'd like to add to my posting. I had a client before who just wanted a simple site. Nothing fancy and no flash. No hover effects. And the bottom line was that though the design was not striking; it helps him get some business and income. And I've learned that it's not always having a super great design but functionality, user interface play an important role in generating business. And his target audience were traders; the type of people who were not particular about great designs. Just my 2 cents. Thanks

;)

Looks really good - simple but good. One thing tho, I would add a mrgin to the top and bottom, so it does not touch the edges to the browser. On some pages your content is sparse so the bottom o fthe container does not touch the bottom of the browser but the top does - and on other pages your content pushes the container bottom to the bottom of the browser and both top and bottom touch, make it uniform by adding a margin - that way it doesn't look so odd when going from a sparse content page to a full page.

 

;)

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I'd like to add to my posting. I had a client before who just wanted a simple site. Nothing fancy and no flash. No hover effects. And the bottom line was that though the design was not striking; it helps him get some business and income. And I've learned that it's not always having a super great design but functionality, user interface play an important role in generating business. And his target audience were traders; the type of people who were not particular about great designs. Just my 2 cents. Thanks

;)

 

Thanks man, that's great to hear.

 

Looks really good - simple but good. One thing tho, I would add a mrgin to the top and bottom, so it does not touch the edges to the browser. On some pages your content is sparse so the bottom o fthe container does not touch the bottom of the browser but the top does - and on other pages your content pushes the container bottom to the bottom of the browser and both top and bottom touch, make it uniform by adding a margin - that way it doesn't look so odd when going from a sparse content page to a full page.

 

;)

 

Thanks for the input, I really appreciate it.

To me it feels a little broken up as it is, Header one colour, nav background colour, main content pale green, footer background colour...split sections with black border. So because you have split everything in such a way with the black boarders and used the background colour for some of the sections its just feels like you have said...right I need a header, a menu, somewhere for the content and a footer and just made them all separate so that people can tell them apart right away. So this just makes it feel a little broken up and like nothing really works with each other on the site. Maybe if you add a background colour behind the nav and footer and remove the horizontal black borders that could bring harmony to your site and make it feel less like a cut and paste.

 

Centering text isn't the best idea for most text as it creates quite nasty jagged lines and has been proven to be harder for people to read, things like addresses are fine but you about text and home page text just looks a little poorly placed on the page.

 

Also is there a reason why your site is so wide yet you only use a small amount of space in the middle of it? It seems odd in the content section so wide that doesn't make use of the space so much. It just makes the text seem not considered that much as well as the placement of the image...its almost as if you didn't know what to do with it so you just decided to center everything. Especially when your logo isn't central to the header it just gives your layout this off balanced look

 

 

 

Anyway bad opinions over, the basic layout is quite nice, a simple menu is fine but it does need a little something to connect it to the rest of the site. Coding is great can't fault it.

 

 

It may seem like I have be really nasty but when you look at it there are only really two small things, think about uniting the site with a splash of colour, think about how your content layout.

I really don't know what to think. It's clean, easy to navigate, isn't offending to look at. It does look like a frontpage template though. I guess im looking at this site thinking, what the hell is the point of this?

 

Is it to sell the companies products/services? I dont think so, there are no mouth watering examples, nothing teasing me to follow the links, images in the header arent really telling me anything, and those pink flowers confuse the message.

 

Actually, what else is a website for? I suppose for the kudos of saying hey I have a website, well it succeeds at that.

 

Basically, after working through it and thinking about it for 30mins, it just smells of meh. sure its a website, yes its well coded, ok there are some alignment issues, but i just cant help but think what is this website actually supposed to be doing for the client

Hmm.. Would you please enlighten me as to why I would put more than just "Header" in the alt tag? :pp

Sorry, not great at SEO! :lol:

 

The reason for using alt tags, is not only to do with SEO, but usability.

Imagine someone browsing your site with images turned off, or using a screen reader etc, the alt tag would be present to advise them of what the image says, shows or portrays.

 

Visit your site with images turned off, and you'll see what I mean. It currently just states "Header" at the top where the banner image is, no site/company name, nothing. Not very helpful.

 

Alt tags are supposed to be a description of the image :)

 

In terms of SEO, using alt tags can be very beneficial, as it allows you to increase the number of keywords on your page.

 

Instead of "header", try something like "banner image for DeFeo's farm and garden market", which will instantly increase the weight of keywords farm, garden market, and DeFeo (assuming they are the company designated keywords of course! :pp)

 

I'm by no means an SEO expert, but little things like this SHOULD become second nature.

 

(and the aforementioned link is still throwing a 404 btw :) )

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I really don't know what to think. It's clean, easy to navigate, isn't offending to look at. It does look like a frontpage template though. I guess im looking at this site thinking, what the hell is the point of this?

 

Is it to sell the companies products/services? I dont think so, there are no mouth watering examples, nothing teasing me to follow the links, images in the header arent really telling me anything, and those pink flowers confuse the message.

 

Actually, what else is a website for? I suppose for the kudos of saying hey I have a website, well it succeeds at that.

 

Basically, after working through it and thinking about it for 30mins, it just smells of meh. sure its a website, yes its well coded, ok there are some alignment issues, but i just cant help but think what is this website actually supposed to be doing for the client

 

Thank you for your opinion. The client received the site today, he loves it.

 

The reason for using alt tags, is not only to do with SEO, but usability.

Imagine someone browsing your site with images turned off, or using a screen reader etc, the alt tag would be present to advise them of what the image says, shows or portrays.

 

Visit your site with images turned off, and you'll see what I mean. It currently just states "Header" at the top where the banner image is, no site/company name, nothing. Not very helpful.

 

Alt tags are supposed to be a description of the image :)

 

In terms of SEO, using alt tags can be very beneficial, as it allows you to increase the number of keywords on your page.

 

Instead of "header", try something like "banner image for DeFeo's farm and garden market", which will instantly increase the weight of keywords farm, garden market, and DeFeo (assuming they are the company designated keywords of course! :pp)

 

I'm by no means an SEO expert, but little things like this SHOULD become second nature.

 

(and the aforementioned link is still throwing a 404 btw :) )

 

Thanks for clearing that up, I will do that from now on.

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To me it feels a little broken up as it is, Header one colour, nav background colour, main content pale green, footer background colour...split sections with black border. So because you have split everything in such a way with the black boarders and used the background colour for some of the sections its just feels like you have said...right I need a header, a menu, somewhere for the content and a footer and just made them all separate so that people can tell them apart right away. So this just makes it feel a little broken up and like nothing really works with each other on the site. Maybe if you add a background colour behind the nav and footer and remove the horizontal black borders that could bring harmony to your site and make it feel less like a cut and paste.

 

Centering text isn't the best idea for most text as it creates quite nasty jagged lines and has been proven to be harder for people to read, things like addresses are fine but you about text and home page text just looks a little poorly placed on the page.

 

Also is there a reason why your site is so wide yet you only use a small amount of space in the middle of it? It seems odd in the content section so wide that doesn't make use of the space so much. It just makes the text seem not considered that much as well as the placement of the image...its almost as if you didn't know what to do with it so you just decided to center everything. Especially when your logo isn't central to the header it just gives your layout this off balanced look

 

 

 

Anyway bad opinions over, the basic layout is quite nice, a simple menu is fine but it does need a little something to connect it to the rest of the site. Coding is great can't fault it.

 

 

It may seem like I have be really nasty but when you look at it there are only really two small things, think about uniting the site with a splash of colour, think about how your content layout.

 

Hey Dizi, I really appreciate you taking your time to review the site. I will keep what you said in mind for future websites.

 

I really appreciate your input. :)

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I think this is where the validation stuff is just for snobs.

 

I'm sorry, I expected way more from yourself. I always deemed yourself to be quite creative. Perhaps you only want to know about coding? If so I will leave it to the others but the overall theme of the site looks a bit cheap.

 

char

 

Thanks for your opinion. I don't validate to be a snob, I validate because I'm a coder.

 

I am a coder, not a designer. And also, not to be harsh, but I would learn to design before criticizing others (I've had a look at your website) :unsure: .

Not a bad site.

 

I think the header is nice and from then on down the site could use a little makeup the page layouts hold some nice apps like the road planner and the image gallery just i feel the look of displayed content could do with some work on presentation and also the copyright at bottom could be smaller as this kinda jumps out to much for me.

 

other than this not bad at all. remeber a little styling goes a long way! :-)

_blank does not validate for XHTML Strict 1.0. It does however validate above this standard.

 

Personally, I feel that opening a new window (especially without warning the user) when a link is clicked is essentially controlling the user's experience instead of allowing the user control. I don't like websites that do that and I shy away from those activities when designing my websites.

 

must just be my html tidy thing, i've used _blank before and that's always flagged up errors for me. I thought the _ was a disallowed character or something?

 

Edit: i was using an sgml parser, that's why it flagged up.

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Not a bad site.

 

I think the header is nice and from then on down the site could use a little makeup the page layouts hold some nice apps like the road planner and the image gallery just i feel the look of displayed content could do with some work on presentation and also the copyright at bottom could be smaller as this kinda jumps out to much for me.

 

other than this not bad at all. remeber a little styling goes a long way! :-)

 

 

_blank does not validate for XHTML Strict 1.0. It does however validate above this standard.

 

Personally, I feel that opening a new window (especially without warning the user) when a link is clicked is essentially controlling the user's experience instead of allowing the user control. I don't like websites that do that and I shy away from those activities when designing my websites.

 

 

Thanks for the input guys, I appreciate it.

I am a coder, not a designer. And also, not to be harsh, but I would learn to design before criticizing others (I've had a look at your website) unsure.gif .

 

Meshach, in your own words your a coder, in the example of your site you dont know good design therefore I ask you this, what the hell qualifys you to be so rude? smooth was spot on it does look cheap, but i guess thats what your client wanted by hiring a bunch of school kids.

what's with some of these threads giving off negative vibes?

 

Anyway,

 

I feel that opening a new window (especially without warning the user) when a link is clicked is essentially controlling the user's experience instead of allowing the user control.

 

I totally agree with you, however what the client wants, the client gets, i only advise them.

 

I think i said that in another thread somewhere, but i agree, the user should always retain control of their experience, if they want to open it in a new window, they will open it in a new window.

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i guess thats what your client wanted by hiring a bunch of school kids.

 

I have removed the link, stop bringing the client into this you moron. It's OK if you insult me but don't you EVER bring a client into this.

 

Also, I don't know what you mean about 'hiring a bunch of school kids', you're bringing my brothers into this? Don't you EVER do that again. I'm dead serious, I will leave this forum and never come back if you ever associate someone else with me.

Woah guys. Let's calm down. It's a forum and it's a website, not the end of the world. A little bit too much negativity here me thinks.

 

We should be giving and receiving critique not starting World War III.

 

Be cool.

I have removed the link, stop bringing the client into this you moron. It's OK if you insult me but don't you EVER bring a client into this.

 

Also, I don't know what you mean about 'hiring a bunch of school kids', you're bringing my brothers into this? Don't you EVER do that again. I'm dead serious, I will leave this forum and never come back if you ever associate someone else with me.

 

Calm down mate - that is not a very clever threat to make... surely you will be the only one to suffer from leaving the forum? I mean... it's hardly the 'We Love Meshach' forum.

 

Wow... you sound like your part of the mafia or something :lol:

 

Just chill out a bit. All Andy is saying is you should take any sort of criticism much better than you did and never lash out at someone for pointing out the obvious.

 

Personally I think the site looks poor, but I can bet it is magnificently coded because that is what you do best.

 

Just take a deep breath, count to ten and then think about your reply. ;)

Right, as the purpose of this thread has changed, and the link removed, I see no reason for keeping it open.

 

If anyone thinks any different then please met me know.

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