Hi Guys,

 

Hope your well. Looking for some feedback on these little bad boys. Hope everyone is well?

First thought is that I have no idea what the MW even means. The colors and font also don't mean fitness to me.

I am not sure I get the meaning of any of them, I am pretty sure though that the one top right gave me the immediate impression of something to do with pornography.

 

Why have you used those colours and why those letter positions?

The first one, though I'd adapt it to be looser so that it flows more. It's to do with fitness and movement so I'd imagine the lines should be free from sharp edges.

Er, well. Top left - the MW crash and why those colours; Top right - the MW don't work together, who is she? Are we supposed to want a body like that, if so can I have a red head please; Bottom left - AW or is it MV?; Bottom right - I'm sure I sore captain scarlet of the misterons sneak through there. The letters appear to be creating some sort of symbolic image from a 60's tv show, why?

Does M stands for 'Men'?

Does W stands for 'Women'?

 

Can you clarify these?

 

What I feel about the logos is the 2nd one - top right is the best. The bottom right is not good for eyes I guess. The top left and bottom left are not so great.

 

Cheers!

Barry

Sorry Cherry, none of the logo's tickle my fancy at all except for perhaps the one with the 'pole dancer'

 

As you have not explained anything, there is little to critique. None of the logo's "say" anything at all about fitness except for the text that actually spells it out!

 

If you want positive critique, please try to accompany your logo's with some sort of rationale.

ie. Why you chose that font, colour, image, ideas, combination of shapes etc. and how it fits in with your prospective clients wants, needs and desires etc.

 

In other words, explain it in the way that you SHOULD explain it to your client - afterall, how else can you sell them your idea?

 

A client appreciates an explanation of how you (the designer) have arrived at a solution - even if some of it is contrived, they will at least respect that you have thought about it (them) and not just thrown some random elements together in the hope that......

 

Also ask yourself, are you satisfied with those 4 designs? Be honest. If you are, then fine - if not, then ask yourself why not and how can you improve on them. If you're not satisfied with the design yourself, how can you sell it to your client?

 

A bit harsh perhaps?... maybe.

 

The positives: I like your own 'cherry designs' logo - it's simple, attractive and easily conveys the message. That's the sort of thinking that you need to put into all your designs. You also need to find your 'style' that you are good at.

 

Cheers, Steve.

 

ps. Anyway, so as you don't think that I'm "All tip, and no iceberg" and just a self opinionated ******* who says stuff without anything to back it up - as an exercise I'll post one of my logo's for critique... and wait for the ricochet..... youch!

 

[EDIT]: btw. I hope this is taken in an overall positive light - it's not meant to be nasty even though some of it may come across that way.

Edited June 3, 201412 yr by stixstudios

I think the 3rd one is pretty good, to me an extra leg to show "w" is not a good idea.