Hi, My new portfolio: http://www.jonathanfava.com

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Thanks!

I really like this nice, clean layout. It's a really well balanced page, with valid code.

 

I have only two criticisms: first one is that your headers are images - you will increase accessibility by using text for these, and I spotted an absent apostrophe here:

 

Contact me and let's get your next project underway.

 

I can't decide whether I like the image of the mouse in the header. It's nicely placed, but maybe a bit to generic. I'd like to see something that says a bit more about you, or has a bit more individuality.

 

Other than that, I can't fault it, and it looks like you have a very nice portfolio there too

I agree with what notbanksy said, but I dont really like the mouse there and there should be something interesting on the page that stands out and makes it clear that your a creative and individual designer rather than a bland and boring website design that doesn't say much about you.

 

Plus, I dont like how the navigation changes size, weight and font as you have clicked on it, I personally think it looks a bit silly

I agree with the above comments. Very nice looking site, and pleasing to look at. But I agree that the images of the headers should be converted into text - this wont detract from the look assuming you match them for size and color to the image versions. Also, the emboldening when you click on a navigation link makes it all jump in a very strange way - dont like that very much.

 

Besides that, its really very nice. Some good works in the portfolio too.

that's very nice, my only comment would be about the lack of appropriate heading tags

clean and professional.

 

2 things to mention: the email address can be read from the source code as it is. Maybe you could use javascript to encode it but you can also get rid of it since you have a contact form. The second thing is the contact form itself which accepts any data in the required field. I would recommend to code in some form validation for that. Also, a captcha would help.

When you roll over the tab that is currently selected, the tabs move slightly.

 

I am getting a javascript error on the Portfolio page.

 

missing { before function body

window.open ('http://www.emizon.com')\n

 

Bob

Nice clean website. I like the look of it.