October 14, 201015 yr Completed a new web design for my website. Haven't had time to fill it with all content yet. And i will also have to fix the section for the portfolio. It need to look better and separated from the rest. But roughly, any suggestions? www.williamastrom.se /will
October 15, 201015 yr Not bad, but I think there's too much text in the Chunk font. I would limit it to just the h2's and change the font of headings below that to something simpler, perhaps the same as the body text. Also, maybe it's just me, but I like it when a portfolio starts out with an introductory paragraph. It seems a little friendlier, and serves as a better transition than just having portfolio items right away. Your About Me blurb is short & sweet enough that it may be able to serve as an intro. I'd add a little more space between the labels and fields in the contact form; right now they're sitting directly on top. The red links in the footer are also a little hard to read. Other than that I really like it.
October 18, 201015 yr Very nice, love the Boston Atlantic site you did too in your portfolio, v slick
October 18, 201015 yr Very nice, agreed about the introcudtory paragraph to start. Perhaps move the 'about me' paragraph higher in the page. Also increase the line height as it is chopping off some of the loops of the 'g's in your text. Good work though
October 19, 201015 yr Fonts are too big, or you want it that way?. Should have navigation menu for about me, home, services etc...
October 19, 201015 yr Any man of art knows that this site does not need any tweaking. its perfectly fine and stylish. great job
October 19, 201015 yr is it the font or is the line height too low for the font you've used? It looks like the bottom of the letter 'g' is missing in your text.
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