What do you think?

 

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still working on it.....these are my ideas so far

the main picture will be a slide and hover on the menu (simple), the hire me button and the pictures on the bottom will also have hover, they will turn a little darker.

 

also the button is not finished yet is just a plan pink rounded rectangle right now

 

thnks

I can't give you a critique on it as I know next to nothing about web design. But personally I really like it.

 

Sorry I can't really be of much help. Apart from the fact you've spelled 'photography' wrong

Lovely looking design mate. Clean and sexy! Good job!

Lovely looking design mate. Clean and sexy! Good job!

 

thanks men still working on it...

i will post when the site goes live

Nice design. One little remark: I would advise to get rid of this pseudo-handwritten font in the logo. You could write this text on the paper, then scan it. Or at least to edit the logo in some vector editor like Illustrator for to diminish the sameness of letters 'a', 'e' and especially doubled 'n'.

BTW you could play with senses of the word 'Reflections' and reflect it literally.

Nice Mock up! Liking it lots. I would say you need to check your written text as some of it doesnt make sence. Like the quote at the bottom of the image.

Nice design. One little remark: I would advise to get rid of this pseudo-handwritten font in the logo. You could write this text on the paper, then scan it. Or at least to edit the logo in some vector editor like Illustrator for to diminish the sameness of letters 'a', 'e' and especially doubled 'n'.

BTW you could play with senses of the word 'Reflections' and reflect it literally.

 

totally agree with you i only spend two minutes on it, need to work on it

Did you mean to put photografy as opposed to photography... just in case you forget to change this typo.

My only little criticism is increase the line spacing on the text under life is full of memories, as it seems a little squished. Other than that I like the simplicity, it will be nice to see how it looks and functions once it is coded up. So I really hope you will share that with us once it is done

I'd also change the white borders around the images to a slightly off white. Just to reduce the contrast range slightly.

 

Just my $0.02

Agree with bocaj, border colours should be dulled down a bit.

 

It looks slightly off-centre I don't know if that was intentional or just because it's an image.

 

I'm not sure I 100% like the typography and the use of CAPS when it comes to the overlay of the images for example 'WEDDING GALLERY'. You could make these as images unless of course you are looking to use them as keywords for SEO etc.

 

The overall design is really nice though, clean and professional, it will be a portfolio they can be proud of. Will be interesting to see it when it's all coded.

Nice clean looking design,

Nice man. Looking sweet . Very professional!

Agree with bocaj, border colours should be dulled down a bit.

 

It looks slightly off-centre I don't know if that was intentional or just because it's an image.

 

I'm not sure I 100% like the typography and the use of CAPS when it comes to the overlay of the images for example 'WEDDING GALLERY'. You could make these as images unless of course you are looking to use them as keywords for SEO etc.

 

The overall design is really nice though, clean and professional, it will be a portfolio they can be proud of. Will be interesting to see it when it's all coded.

 

thanks

 

as for the overlay of the image, that's a great idea will work on it, i don't like the typography that much. im still working on it

It looks cool - I like the way you have managed to arrange the gallery on your page.

 

thanks

 

/*UPDATE*/

 

did some update to the logo and the typography

I think it looks great. The only thing I would add is a flash rotator which sounds tacky but can be quite nicely done and there are some nice easy to edit ones out there to download. I use them on the sites I do and it just allows you to sell more services in the one space aswell as making it a little dynamic. Just my suggestions.

Not bad. A couple of remarks about the logo:

1. Try to use the same font as in Photography Galleries is used.

2. Reflection under the logo is a bit shifted to the left and top (devil in details).

just one tiny detail you might wish to change, at the top where it says "by Rianna" the space between the b and the y is a bit loose.

Not bad. A couple of remarks about the logo:

1. Try to use the same font as in Photography Galleries is used.

2. Reflection under the logo is a bit shifted to the left and top (devil in details).

 

1. it is the same font is just that i change a litle bit the spacing and add a litle details

2. fix that, Thanks

 

just one tiny detail you might wish to change, at the top where it says "by Rianna" the space between the b and the y is a bit loose.

 

wow that's a very good detail there thanks

1. it is the same font is just that i change a litle bit the spacing and add a litle details

Try to use the font as is, without these changings.