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New design for myself, how about this one? Better?

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I kind of like this one. What do you think?

I will later have a navbar to the top right instead of the jqeury css text. But until my portfolio is a little bigger i cant have it there yet!

 

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looks nice but the right aligned text is horrible ;)

 

You are SO right! Seriously i don´t know what i was thinking. Must be the flue and the late hour. Or its because i have mixed emotions regarding how to place the section texts. Left or right?

 

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looks nice,my only comment is justify those text..

 

Hi , thanks for the comment. Actually justifing texts in webdesign layout is a big No No. So that won´t happen.. But ive made some changes!

 

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This is where i am at right now

 

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It's starting to look like a wordpress blog! are you familiar with it?

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mmm i know.... havent decided if it sucks or not yet:)

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mmm i know.... havent decided if it sucks or not yet:)

maybe i should sell it and start over

I don't think you need to start over. I would recommend you design it to the point you think it's complete, and then throw it on here for feedback. The fact you've uploaded the screenshots as you make changes, seems like you're not sure exactly what you want.

 

Hope this helps!

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Final result at: www.williamastrom.se

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sucks

 

Thanks for your time to evaluate my design, could you give me some pointers on how to improve it?

sucks

 

I have altered your warn level Vinllare. This is a friendly forum where we encourage CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. If you have nothing to say that will benefit the OP then please don't post up. It is people like you that will put newcomers off of the forum and give us a bad name.

 

Consider yourself warned.

 

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@ Emwi: I am not a massive fan of the design to be honest. There is too much white space at the top of the page for me, you need to throw in a really impacting message up there.

 

I think that you could make more of your 'work' section, with a nicer screen-grab and maybe a bit of razzle-dazzle in there too.

 

On a positive note, you have a nice colour scheme, with a clean looking site that is professional and readable. :)

 

Good luck

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I have altered your warn level Vinllare. This is a friendly forum where we encourage CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. If you have nothing to say that will benefit the OP then please don't post up. It is people like you that will put newcomers off of the forum and give us a bad name.

 

Consider yourself warned.

 

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@ Emwi: I am not a massive fan of the design to be honest. There is too much white space at the top of the page for me, you need to throw in a really impacting message up there.

 

I think that you could make more of your 'work' section, with a nicer screen-grab and maybe a bit of razzle-dazzle in there too.

 

On a positive note, you have a nice colour scheme, with a clean looking site that is professional and readable. :)

 

Good luck

 

Thanks for a better comment:)

 

Yeah, i dont really like the whitespace myself at the beginning. Will probably do something about it. Just don´t really know yet how to. Ill get back when ive worked something out!

I won't tell you again Vinllare - this is not about YOUR portfolio or YOUR design skills. It is about the OP's. If you want your designs reviewed (which by the way look like something off of Template Monster with NO originality what-so-ever, but that is not the point) then post up your own thread.

 

Now either make constructive comments in future or leave the forum and never come back again.

 

One more unnecessary outburst from you and I will ban you. Simple as.

Vinllare, остинь, хлопче!

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