October 8, 200916 yr hey people... here’s my 1st site, yup there may be a few problems with it, so please do let me know. I still have no idea why my top nav images don’t blend into the background nav as they should, so any help with that would be great. Also I have not yet figured out how to connect the whole email stuff up, I did get a package with email included, just need to work out how to connect it up. other than that what do you think I should charge for this? I've done it all from scratch, the photoshop, flash, html and css. here’s the site...alchemyprocesssolutions.com thanx in advance!
October 8, 200916 yr For a first site it's not bad at all. the colours sit well together and the graphics are clean. I think the grey border is a bit thick on the header (might just be me tho) You've used divs and css for the most part, so why the table for the main nav? also get some hover states in your links to make it more interactive to get the email link to work just add <a href="mailto:contactus@alchemyprocesssolutions.com">contactus@alchemyprocesssolutions.com</a> wherever you want the link. It's better than my first site by far
October 8, 200916 yr Not too bad mate. Better than my first site, a few tweaks and it will look pretty nice.
October 8, 200916 yr Author thanks for that, I feel over the moon! I know its a box standard basic site, but I'm chuffed to bits with it and so proud of myself, feels like a real accomplishment! wooo hoo!!! anyhow, I have tested it in safari, opera and firefox as I have a mac and no access to IE, so if anyone can let me know its working ok in it, that would be great! And if not a screenshot of the problem would be helpful. Thanks guys!
October 8, 200916 yr Author Not too bad mate. Better than my first site, a few tweaks and it will look pretty nice. mate??? I'm a lady, any suggestions of the tweaks?
October 8, 200916 yr mate??? I'm a lady, any suggestions of the tweaks? Sorry mate, I made just made the assumption.
October 8, 200916 yr looks good, but: logo is blurred and the text is not antialiased flash text moves too quickly to read comfortably why layout your nav in tables when you could have used a list? tables are for tabular data... how about a favicon?! resizing text ends up with it disappearing on key skills the blue text falls on top of the blue picture on the right. pretty good effort otherwise though!
October 8, 200916 yr Hey dude, (oops I mean dudette ) Here is a pic of what IE is doing to your site, I had a look with the 'IE Tab' add-on for Firefox. it looks like there is some extra margin/padding being generated, try adding body{padding-top:0;} to the CSS also you don't need the main div to be relatively positioned and you need to add the semi colons to the end of all your CSS rules.
October 8, 200916 yr Author okies, thanks guys, I will get onto the issues mensioned tommorrow, my brain does not seem to be functioning anymore.
October 8, 200916 yr first site - like it..! flash text moves too quickly to read comfortably gatta gree with above - was my first thought
October 9, 200916 yr OMG Flash is way too fast. You gotta slow it down. 12fps but make each full paragraph sit for atleast 5-10 seconds. IMHO
October 9, 200916 yr Author Hey dude, (oops I mean dudette ) Here is a pic of what IE is doing to your site, I had a look with the 'IE Tab' add-on for Firefox. it looks like there is some extra margin/padding being generated, try adding body{padding-top:0;} to the CSS also you don't need the main div to be relatively positioned and you need to add the semi colons to the end of all your CSS rules. lol, your going to laugh at my cowboy methods...basically I couldn't get the header (screenshot below)to appear without a margin at the top, so I built in a white line in my background image so that the nav bar (also in my background image) would align with the nav buttons I was going to put on top. I'll see if it really bothers my client, if so I'll have to change it. so its not an IE thing, that’s my background image, lol, its in all the other browsers too. Also I have slowed down my flash to 20 fps, I don’t want to go any slower than that. You see I'm dyslexic and I know I read slow, so I assumed everyone else would be able to read at the 30 fps, but I guess normal people don’t read that fast either, lol. The navigation is in a table as that’s how I was taught on my course, but if its wrong I'll change that too, to a list then? Maybe that will fix my colour difference in the background and the buttons. The bottom nav is deliberately an image and not html text, hoping people are lazy and don’t type my site in their browser as I haven't finished my portfolio site, so its not live. As soon as it’s done I can change this to a link. Going out to do a spot of grocery shopping now, so fix the rest when I'm back. Thanx ppl!
October 11, 200916 yr Author can anyone help me with the code for rollover/hover images, I have been faffing about with it for the past few days and its not working the way I want.
October 13, 200916 yr For me it looks great for a first attempt. My only concern is that poor quality of the header images, which are pixelated - ie not anti aliased.
October 14, 200916 yr This. They speak the truth. Don't overlook! looks good, but:logo is blurred and the text is not antialiasedflash text moves too quickly to read comfortably why layout your nav in tables when you could have used a list? tables are for tabular data... how about a favicon?!resizing text ends up with it disappearing :(on key skills the blue text falls on top of the blue picture on the right.pretty good effort otherwise though! For me it looks great for a first attempt. My only concern is that poor quality of the header images, which are pixelated - ie not anti aliased.
October 14, 200916 yr Author Hey people, Thanks for the feedback, I have been working my way through the issues, sorted the link on the contact page but just a little stuck with the hover/rollover images, my code does not seem to be working, any help with that would be great. Other than that I wasn’t happy with the header text myself, but I don’t know how to fix it, anti aliased? Any tips on how to do this? My client has asked me to redo the flash and add a link to the home page in the top nav, what are your thoughts on this, although I will do it for my client, generally is it not a know fact that the logo is always a link back to the home page? Also these changes are not live yet, I am just fixing them locally then will put them all live at once, so nothing will be overlooked hopefully. Thanks again
October 14, 200916 yr Hi great work with the website, I wish my first site looked that slick! Have to agree with most of the comments above. But it's all good learning right! Your client should be pleased with you for doing such a great job. I like the addition of the flash and how the site does not rely on it to function properly. My only concern (and it may have been my wireless screwing up) was that it took quite a while for all of the page graphics to load, leaving the site looking very empty. I hope this helps, and top job!
October 19, 200916 yr Author now complete, have a look! took me a while to figure out how to do the rollovers, but its now finally complete. yeay! www.alchemyprocesssolutions.com
October 20, 200916 yr If that's genuinely your first attempt at a website, then you've done a fantastic job.
October 20, 200916 yr I like it, apart from the text just sitting over the images a few pixels, but that's here nor there, a little padding will do the trick... Great work. A designer in the making
October 20, 200916 yr Author Thanks guys, yes this is my first live site, I only did one other one while learning web designing on my course, for which I passed with flying colours, but still have so much more to learn! Below is my fist site ever...but coz it was for a made up restaurant, its not live. I'm not so bad with photoshop, and flash I only know basics, but need to learn illustrator and fireworks, so many employers ask for it!
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