I like your personal site James but "James also do personal work either for himself, or his friends." should be "James also does personal work either for himself, or his friends."
Hope this helps
I am a professional and freelance multimedia designer & wordpress web designer.
I would love to hear peoples feedback of my site as It is always good to hear another opinion.
http://www.lewishealey.co.uk
I made the site with a wordpress template script framework I bought (to save time) and severely edited it to the idea I add.
If you have any questions I would be happy to answer : )