This is a flyer I made for a company that installs elevators and stuff like that.

Actually, I was given a few details about the business, but this is what I got.

My idea was to create a surreal situation which could suggest the ability of this company in particular to satisfy even the hardest request.

Text in the front page says "GTA elevators safety and comfort everywhere", while the other is only a list of its services.

Here to you

 

Edited October 2, 201114 yr by adeptusmagos

given the target audience for stair lifts, is a 'stairway to heaven' in the best taste?

i didnt see it as a stairway to heaven until you pointed it out.

 

maybe ditch the sky and have a warm and comforting room... through the door?

given the target audience for stair lifts, is a 'stairway to heaven' in the best taste?

 

Haha, I get it!

 

@OP: looks nice to me, sky looks a bit odd though.

i didnt see it as a stairway to heaven until you pointed it out.

 

maybe ditch the sky and have a warm and comforting room... through the door?

 

I agree, the sky gives off a "stairway to heaven" feel and looks a bit odd as if the chair lift will fall out of the sky once it reaches the top... but a comforting room will work just fine...overall, a pretty good graphic though...

put a naked megan fox at the top of the stairs bro

I like it, really I do. The one thing I would change is the sky, otherwise it is a pretty neat design!

My initial reaction to the image on the right is that the text looked unorganized. This observation is important because if it wasn't for my best intention of giving you feedback I would have not read the texts inside of it at all - there's too much going on and for a flyer that isn't seem very convenient. You can compensate by tightening the letter spacing and make the space between each word a bit wider.

Edited March 14, 201214 yr by getty

Hi,

 

New here, but still...the text coloring on the left looks ok, but the ones on the right don't...I keep going/looking at the dark text, e.g. ascensori esterni etc, which is scattered on the second page and doesn't really inspire me to look anywhere in particular. Maybe play with the colors a bit and try highlighting some of the really important words.

I thought that it was stunning… Until I read Zed’s post. Now I still think it’s stunning, but I can’t help but laugh at the irony of it. I see what you were going for, to make people who may otherwise feel limited feel like they have can have more freedom. Maybe find something else to replace the sky.

hello I designed also a flyer of coca cola. I work as graphic designer for Flyers Drukken company in Netherlands. I will present him here Why i cannot upload the flyer image.

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Edited January 31, 201313 yr by Flyers Drukken