I was kinda going for the computer draw cartonney look, i tried taking pictures but it didnt look right at all

Dam ie, it looks fine in every single browser according to browsers shot besides IE.

I like it though, nice design the footer on your buisness card is a little hard to read...

Ya the business card is not permanant its kinda a placeholder i threw together in 10 mins. Thanks for the comment tho

ok i have added a last.fm widget to my sidebar and i have also about finished the other pages they are up now and I have also added a post rating system.

I was kinda going for the computer draw cartonney look, i tried taking pictures but it didnt look right at all

 

I don't think that's working out. If you're trying to get a particular look, you'd probably be better off using the same method to create each item. Instead you have some photographic images and some computer drawn stuff. It's coming across more as bad photoshopping, or done by someone who can't be arsed doing it all properly. Try having a consistent look and maybe exaggerating some cartoony aspects?