Hi,

this was my entry for a contest.

 

 

Original pic:

 

 

Honestly, I think it's a little insensitive. I'd question the connotations of a naked woman apparently crying into her hands in a cover of a book that seems to be a guide to female psychology aimed at men.

 

Also, the spacing between the letters really needs addressing.

i thought she was hiding/playful - if she was crying wouldn't her shoulders be more hunched up and her head down?

maybe this is just a test of our reactions

apparently

That's the point.

What we see is not necessarily what it is.

I don't see anything bad in a naked body: it's primitive, intimate and unique. Just like our mind.

I totally agree about the typo: I didn't have Indesign on the laptop I worked with. Furthermore, I'm really bad with the lettering in general.

Could you be more specific, please? It would be great.

 

Thanks davep for your feedback.

 

Cheers.

 

I don't see anything bad in a naked body: it's primitive, intimate and unique. Just like our mind.

 

But to me she looks like a rape victim or a woman who's traumatised by something, especially as the cover is colourless. Is the book about helping a female partner who's traumatised by a past experience?

Is the book about helping a female partner who's traumatised by a past experience?

I don't know.

I was given just the title.

B&W was a specific request.

 

Anyway, here is the winner.

Any further advice will help for future works.

What is your main reason to put this post?

they want to show their ebook cover and maybe get some feedback or comments on it...