Please take a moment to review

 

http://www.naits.com.ar

 

 

It's the website for my consulting business. I'd really like feedback from experienced designers about what you think is wrong .

 

Thanks a lot in advance

 

Regards

 

EDIT: Typo

Edited August 30, 201115 yr by MAT

typography when you get into the site needs a load of work, spacing, layout and so on. On the home page id ditch the blue box in the grey section and just put the content in there makes it look cleaner then.

I see what you mean pandadoodle, inner pages looks untidy, specially http://www.naits.com.ar/ideas.html

I'm not too good formatting text, these long paragraphs look better when justified?

 

Thnaks

It's very hard to critique design when you don't speak the language.

It's very hard to critique design when you don't speak the language.

 

Think of the content as Lorem ipsum, I'm really looking for some advice about layout, graphics, colors, etc.

 

Thanks!

And please comment on the font choices too, I'm an engineer, not a designer so I went with something I thought looked nice, but I'd really appreciate a designer's POV. This is my first webpage btw, so I read a little about CSS and HTML before starting.

 

Thanks!

typography when you get into the site needs a load of work, spacing, layout and so on. On the home page id ditch the blue box in the grey section and just put the content in there makes it look cleaner then.

 

Pandadoodle, could please provide some advice wrt typography? I've fixed the CSS a little but I'm not experienced enough to know what needs to be done.

 

Thanks

Bump, please people, I want and need your feedback

Thanks

http://psd.tutsplus.com/articles/techniques/a-20-minute-intro-to-typography-basics/

Why is your title overlapping the border between the white and gray boxes? Is this intentional? Also, the homepage doesn't look attractive at all. Maybe find a different color scheme that works.

Why is your title overlapping the border between the white and gray boxes? Is this intentional? Also, the homepage doesn't look attractive at all. Maybe find a different color scheme that works.

 

Marc, I don't understand your comment, could you please post a screenshot? I've attached a picture of the way it looks on my machine.

Thanks for the link pandadoodle!

I like the design. It looks great. Minimalistic, clean. Have no idea if it is effective as I don't speak the language.

This is the translated page so you can have an idea of the content:

http://translate.google.com/translate?u=http%3A%2F%2Fnaits.com.ar%2F&hl=es&langpair=auto|en&tbb=1&ie=UTF-8

 

Thnx

Looks fine to me. With the translation, the navigation is clear to me too.

I like it, though I don't think the greeny blue colour sits nicely within the grey areas

I'm not so sure about the blueish box too, I'll do somthing about it. Ideas?

I've just noticed google translate breaks the layout a little (spacing, position), so please check both the translated and original page.

 

Thanks

I'm not so sure about the blueish box too, I'll do somthing about it. Ideas?

 

I believe someone said this already, but personally I'd ditch it altogether and try putting the text in the background of it instead.

 

Also, I don't know if the translator worked correctly but on the following statement it says: 'We are your partner to carry out their IT projects safely, efficiently and effectively. See our portfolio of services.' To me the words safely efficiently and effectively should be muddled around a bit because thats a bit of a mouth full. Try: Efficiently safely and effectively.

 

-Luke

Luke, the translation was just to give you an idea of what it was all about. Most sentences have poor grammar as it is an automatic translation "word for word".

 

I've uploaded a new version without the bluebox in naits.com.ar/index2.html.

 

Let me know how it is working our for you, I think the design becomes too monochromatic and need some highlights to bring life to it.

 

Thanks for your input!

Luke, the translation was just to give you an idea of what it was all about. Most sentences have poor grammar as it is an automatic translation "word for word".

 

I've uploaded a new version without the bluebox in naits.com.ar/index2.html.

 

Let me know how it is working our for you, I think the design becomes too monochromatic and need some highlights to bring life to it.

 

Thanks for your input!

 

Yeah I agree, there needs to be something to bring that box to life. Or perhaps some form of top border on the small sub-paragraphs. You'll have to look at some other designs and mix things around a little

OK, I think the blue box IDEA was correct, but the execution was really poor, it looked awfull, I'll try some different colors and see how it works.

 

Thanks to everyone who commented so far, you've been very helpful.