February 2, 201115 yr i like it, maybe break up the text a bit more? too much prose for a front page i reckon!
February 3, 201115 yr The site is nice enough, maybe look at the typography a bit possibly increase the default text size a little.
February 3, 201115 yr It's not bad man. I don't like the logo or the top blue banner though. Nice to see some use of CSS3 too. I lived in Norwich for about 5 years, nice place.
February 3, 201115 yr Hey Ryan, Just had a little look at your website... seems to be quite nice although I feel that it could do with more clearer images of attractions in Norfolk. Maybe increase the line-height of the body text just to give it a little bit more breathing space, you could probably throw in a relevant image amongst the text too just to help sell your site a little bit more. For the 'request a brochure' section could you make more of this? maybe Photoshop a fake brochure together just to give it a bit more impact on the page so viewers know exactly where to download it, as I feel it's pretty lost at the moment.
February 5, 201115 yr Author hi there, i have done an update, please check it out!! marineworld.co.uk
February 11, 201115 yr I'm shacked up in Norfolk for three months awaiting move elsewhere so if anything your website has been quite handy to me
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