Hey,

 

I've been doing website design and graphics on and off for past few years. I've learnt it all myself in my spare time. I'm still learning stuff as I go along, but I wanted to put together a website portfolio to show my stuff which I make, and also to gain peoples attention as they might want some stuff doing.

 

www.BreezeDesigns.co.uk

 

As I said again, because my site is new, and I'm still learning stuff as I go along, my prices are very cheap at the moment, and I still need to build up my portfolio. Some of the stuff shown on my portfolio is really old stuff I done when I was much younger, so they will be replaced once I make new stuff.

 

The site isn't 100% done yet, some stuff still needs to be added etc, but I just wanted it up as soon as possible.

 

Thanks

Some, hopefully constructive, points;

 

Ty to space out the elements a little more, they seem a little cluttered.

 

Typography, that font is really awful and you should try to work on the sites typography. Never center text.

 

Code: The header isn't really needed "as is" likewise the navigation <ul> doesn't need to be in a div (don't use elements to clear either).

 

Don't use tables for layout/presentation.

(also doesn't validate and not semantic)

Hi Dynamo,

Some comments for you;

Justify text left rather than center

Add some more whitespace

Either remove the bg stripes (they hurt my eyes) or make them a lot thinner

CSS - Strip out your inline CSS and put it into an external style sheet

 

Good luck

I would possibly go over the grammar used and make the text on the quotes different from the rest of the text (portfolio page)

Some, hopefully constructive, points;

 

Ty to space out the elements a little more, they seem a little cluttered.

 

Typography, that font is really awful and you should try to work on the sites typography. Never center text.

 

Code: The header isn't really needed "as is" likewise the navigation <ul> doesn't need to be in a div (don't use elements to clear either).

 

Don't use tables for layout/presentation.

(also doesn't validate and not semantic)

 

I think he might of used a font on his computer that you have not got therefore your browser has displayed the default font which is Times New Roman, this may not be the case just a quick suggestion.

to be honest, they way your site looks now, i wouldnt buy anything, if someone seen your site and someone else's who was better, they would go with the better, you need to able to compete, with other designers, but with your designs i dont think that is possible.