Hi!

 

This is my first selfmade webdesign and i want you guys to help me .

 

Just say what you mean and maybe somethings i can do with it to make it bether..

 

 

Link:

http://www.codedpreview.com/?view=3052

 

 

 

 

and.. one more thing.. Is it any good sites that has free 3d models, images? Please free sites .

 

Best regards,

zinzzinco

Looks okay, the font you used is not very nice though.

Ok.

 

I think its a litle weird or something:P.. can anyone else say something that is "wrong" with it?..

 

Thanks

Best regards,

zinzzinco.

I agree that font is awful. It's not the easiest to read and the contrast is low between text and the background colours. Why use a gradient it adds nothing to the design.

Its quite good, but I agree with Daniel that the font could be better. Also, your Navbar at the top is too dark and doesnt contrast well with the text. Either make the text white or lighten the navbar background. also, maybe adding some images could look good?

This is not webdesign as such - your whole page is one jpg. For this to be anywhere near realistic, you need to actually code it.

 

As a sketch, this is what I think:

The font is awful - good for headlines in large sizes, miserable and difficult to read in smaller. Keep it for headlines, find another for the text.

 

Your navbar is unreadable, same applies there. Try another font, and maybe even in white.

 

Too much gradient-stuff going on, without being consistent. Why a gradient on the red box but not the orange? Or why a gradient at all?

 

Move the headline, "ultimate host" over the main content.

 

Make the headlines in the sidebar consistent. Do not squish things in. If you must use that font there, at least make it bold. And uniform.

 

And use a spellcheck. It is "slogan" not "slogon".