Hello friends,

 

Orginal page

 

my design

Edited March 14, 201115 yr by sash_oo7

New design is definitely better.

 

I have some small remarks:

 

1. Try to align middle axes of these text elements
2. There are small issues with right alignment
3. Add more space and/or some separators, maybe bullets, between menu items
4. Add more space between graphics and text (maybe move graphics a bit to left)
5. Make Red More of the same style (the same bullets, the same alignment)
6. The shadow under the guy with hammer does not match other shadows.

Hope that can help.

 

 

 

 

Nice design, overall

New design is definitely better.

 

I have some small remarks:

 

1. Try to align middle axes of these text elements
2. There are small issues with right alignment
3. Add more space and/or some separators, maybe bullets, between menu items
4. Add more space between graphics and text (maybe move graphics a bit to left)
5. Make Red More of the same style (the same bullets, the same alignment)
6. The shadow under the guy with hammer does not match other shadows.

Hope that can help.

 

 

 

 

Nice design, overall

 

thanks u very much ya those need to be fixed

nice design, im a bit confused about the guy with the hammer, is he trying to smash facebook?? Also not sure if the large question mark next to 'why' balances with the what and how symbols?

Everything the other posters have said is spot on.

 

My thoughts:

 

You are absolutely moving in a good direction, but the current layout feels cluttered and disorganized. You have large areas of vertical whitespace and tiny gaps of horizontal whitespace. Try evening things out, giving elements room to breathe on all sides. Get a grid system in there and start lining things up. The icon on the "Why" heading needs to be black to match the other icon/heading combinations.

 

Typographically, I like the font choice but mix it up a bit. It looks like a Gotham knockoff... maybe Nevis? The body copy is not suitable as is. Add some leading, pick something that is designed for body copy--- this font looks like it's meant to be a display font.

 

You have a lot of nice organic shapes, especially the logo and the little facebook balls, so why don't you try adding a 3 or 4px rounded corner to the "Ask for quote" button and the top link container.

 

The footer links need to align with the left edge of the page content.

 

I'm not a fan of the position of the menu, but try playing with the spacing of the elements and see if that makes it feel "right".

 

Colors are great!

Edited March 14, 201115 yr by porkchops

It's beautiful, but could not UNDERSTAND why this doll with hammer in HAND

Hit the Facebook, Jack,

And don't you come back

no more, no more, no more, no more...