Hey people have posted this before but made some major improvements now so thought be best to start a new topic

 

Could people please provide some feedback/ideas for the below link:

 

www.xplosivwebsolutions.co.uk/harrymillsaudio

 

Note: only the home page and contact page are created at the moment.

 

Thanks

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www.xplosivewebsolutions.co.uk/harrymillsaudio

 

missed the e off xplosive

"latest news, about me and cool links" titles I'd change the bg to match the text bg

It's good however, it feels a little blog like..

First reaction is 'text overload' and there isn't much space. Everything is cramped up. Try using some white space, how about adding more line space? You should think about using the orange for a 'highlight' only, right now all your orange links are telling the user 'look at me!!' 'look at me!!'. Use it in some places, and the important places (where you want the user to be drawn to)

 

hope any of that helps!

as gbm said there is too much text with too less spaces ... especially between latest news and about there shoul be more space oO