December 8, 200916 yr Hi guys, Been keeping quiet around this part for the last while, busy with work and everything else. I've been working on and off last week at doing up mock ups for the web design office I work in and thought I'd get some opinions off you all. We've finally got down to two drafts and now the boss can't choose between them. Personally I prefer the one with no grass but but it's not my choice which design gets approval. All criticism welcome
December 8, 200916 yr Depends what kind of look you are going for. I prefer the top one, as the second one has a big corporate feel about it.
December 8, 200916 yr Author At the moment the office is undecided what kind of look to go for, the corporate or friendly eco one.
December 8, 200916 yr The grassy one seems a bit clip arty and cartooney. For me i'd take a strimmer to the grassy one.
December 8, 200916 yr Grass! More friendly looking! The 'corporate' one is really nice too, so it all goes on what image you want to portray i suppose. Good work!
December 8, 200916 yr I like the structure of the first one. The nav, the buttons on the slider, the typography below the logo... I'd say go with the first one, maybe get rid of the grass, and change the clouds to that glossy mac-like background, and your boss will love it!
December 9, 200916 yr Author i dont like either of them Just the overall look and feel to them is it? I've another draft with a mix of both done up, it's my favourite as I did think the first grass one was a bit scrap book like. Here's a copy of it and also a link to the current site which I should have posted, Link
December 9, 200916 yr Your existing site looks good but maybe too much information on homepage the new designs are good aswell but i would go for something plain
December 9, 200916 yr Top design of the post, but my only quibble with it is the testimonial and portolio link in the right hand column. The single border line around the image feels out of place, something wider and lighter would go better, and the background to the testimonials bubble doesn't work for me.
December 9, 200916 yr I'd fuse them the other way meaning keep the typo from the grassy, and use the header bg of the corporate, maybe leave the clouds faded in a little!
December 10, 200916 yr Author Thanks for the comments, will definitely have to work on the bubble. Will be working on a bit of a mix of all three headers to try get the right look.
December 10, 200916 yr First design, definitely the one that'd catch my eye more. Try empek's suggestion, but on the whole I think it looks great as it is! Nice work.
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