hey just finished making my first proper website for my friends band, if you guys could providem e with some good feedback and ways to improve that would be great, im open for creative crtiscism so please dont be afraid ot be blunt.

http://www.illusionoffear.co.uk

 

thank you

Check your spelling. And I would consider doing something with the page title/logo. If its the bands, get them to come up with something more creative! Look at other bands of a similar genre, look at their branding. Make it cool. Bands are cool. Your website doesn't reflect this. If you go take a look at most signed band websites, they usually have their branding nailed.

It's very simple.

 

I would add a splash of colour in that header, perhaps lime green? That will make it pop out against the grey.

 

I would even consider perhaps using a slightly lighter shade of grey

 

Charlotte

 

I think the website is fine for a business or service of some sort but it doesn't really scream 'Rock band' at me.

 

Add a lot more colour and maybe some more pics.

 

Great job so far!

Hi,

 

Look here, maybe some ideas will appear.