Hey guys, I'm working on a version of the index page for a special my company will be running for the summer and was wondering what you thought of my first version of the ad. The actual site is at local net[dot]com. (with no spaces)

 

any suggestions or comments?

i like!

 

edit: although the logo is a bit crappy (im guessin this isnt your fault) the top nav bar seems a bt out of place

i like!

 

edit: although the logo is a bit crappy (im guessin this isnt your fault) the top nav bar seems a bt out of place

 

thanks!

 

ya the logo was not my doing. and im not supposed to change the top nav bar or the bottom section either. just the center section and the background if i want.

Looks nice! Clear pricing, prominent calls to action, thumbs up ;-)

Thumbs up from me. I like the breakout of the kite on the right margin, adds some character.

Yep, that works for me

Looks great minus the web search and logo