NyanCat

Love the Orange! And the loading icon in the upper right corner is quite nice too! Here is a pat on the back *pat*

Thanks BugsBunny! I like the idea of changing the ampersand to look more like a treble clef! I'll try incorporate that.
 
Thanks benjwoo. I would've expected brass instruments too, but the guy plays guitar and she sings.. so I added the guitar pic. I'll try "jazz up" the first one though.
 
Thanks guys!

Hello,
I don't know what to say exactly, but if You ask me I'd say work more on the first one, make the shape bigger, and since It's a music logo change the & into a treble clef, also try an move it to the left and make Ally inside also.
It's just an opinion, You may or You may not like It.

I don't know much about graphic design i'm afraid. I like the first design, although it screams more subtle, classical music to me, rather than Jazz. Are plectrums used that much in Jazz? I thought it consisted mainly of brass instruments? (Not a clue though ha!)

first one is the strongest.

The 'examples of work' are lacking any real attraction, is all his printing really going to be one standard size, with nothing but gradients for backgrounds and the same font?
 
I doubt it, and using actual examples of what can be achieved would work much better, then organizing the layout better as previously suggested as well.
 
The printer does grab attention well though, but hides the company name a little.