Hello everybody!

 

I hope you are doing great. I haven't been active here in around 2 months. Had exams and then went travelling. In April I think I asked for your opinions on my first try for a portfolio site, at fiob[io.com). I didn't work more on that one after the reviews here and didn't use it. Now I have something new and I'd really appreciate any feedback.

 

I have two versions. The first is found at [obil)ido*com and the second at [obi)lido*com/aj2.html

 

The code is probably too messy and it's not finished at all (logo is a place holder, normal links don't exist, etc). But I'd really appreciate your opinions on which background do you prefer and if the type is fine. I'll also be adding a style changer with several options later.

 

Thanks in advance. I hope to hear from you soon.

They seem to be both the same. But i love the design.

They seem to be both the same. But i love the design.

 

Thanks Kip, I really appreciate it. They ARE pretty similar, but the background image of the content area is a little different. The first uses a radial gradient that blends in with the body image on both sides while the second uses a linear background that blends with the body only on the right side. I'm not sure which one looks better.

The both look really nice, i prefer the aj2 though, I don't know why, i just think it looks nice!

The both look really nice, i prefer the aj2 though, I don't know why, i just think it looks nice!

 

Thanks DN. I appreciate your feedback. Please keep them coming guys.

Definitely the first one, it's such a great concept, gratz on the idea!

 

How will the rest of the page formulate? Right now I think it's too small, you could really do with another area below?

Might just be me, but it looks like you are using Mootools or JQuery effects? I turned Javascript off to have a look and your site broke I got a 404 error.

I like the first one best although there's not much in it. They are very similar. I really like the phrase "Get to know us" great bit of copy there. I didn't like "Just don't hate it. Please." I appreciate the humour, but I think it is a little self deprecating. It would work better for me if you just left it out.

 

Nice work though, could do with more content IMO.

Make it work with javascript turned on. It's not harder than to upload the content in differnt pages. People with Javascriptt will use JQuery, and user who don't will use the standard sites, like http://www.obilido.com/contact.html.

Thank you all for your replies and feedback.

 

I am only asking for which design you prefer. I did mention that ''normal linkes'' don't work, but I didn't make it clear. I'm using Mootools, but all the JS effects I use are unobtrusive. You can see that the menu links to different pages, but they are not there. I have to finish the design and copy before getting to those.

 

Talking about copy, this is dummy content. I just dont like to use Lorem, so I just put something there. Thanks for the feedback anyway.

 

Please keep them coming guys. Keep in mind that the content is dummy content and that the normal pages, for people with JS off, are not uploaded yet. I just need to know which design I should use.

 

Thanks!

Oh and MolotovRuss, first of all thank you. I was hoping to make it small enough to not require any scrolling. But I too think it may need more space. The only add on I was planning is a style changer, but I may add something there. We'll see.

 

Thanks again.