March 1, 201214 yr Good Afternoon Please provide feedback for layout of new Information site. (Microsite) Thanks in advance
March 1, 201214 yr Needs a grid. I understand you're going for the wonky, sketchy feel but it doesn't look deliberate enough. Also we can't really see it in context. Is it coded yet?
March 1, 201214 yr Author Its coded, just not been uploaded yet, what suggestions on grid, i haven't found anything I like enough yet
March 1, 201214 yr It's more about keeping the 'wonky' feel yet having line up well and be pleasing to the eye.
March 1, 201214 yr Author It's more about keeping the 'wonky' feel yet having line up well and be pleasing to the eye. I am going to add another article in the larger white space underneath the 2 smaller articles.
March 1, 201214 yr The typography is really bad, and the layout is disjointed. I don't know if you're planning to add colour but the greyscale look is ugly and dated too. You need to spend more time thinking about typography, that handwritten style font is completely inappropriate, not to mention difficult to read. The copy isn't much kop either, you have bad leading issues. I would also suggest you don't tell people which browser to use. And as Mike says, this is crying out for a grid because the layout is really awkward and so many elements don't line up or sit together nicely. It just needs a lot more work I'm afraid, it's nowhere near a finished product.
March 1, 201214 yr Author The typography is really bad, and the layout is disjointed. I don't know if you're planning to add colour but the greyscale look is ugly and dated too. You need to spend more time thinking about typography, that handwritten style font is completely inappropriate, not to mention difficult to read. The copy isn't much kop either, you have bad leading issues. I would also suggest you don't tell people which browser to use. And as Mike says, this is crying out for a grid because the layout is really awkward and so many elements don't line up or sit together nicely. It just needs a lot more work I'm afraid, it's nowhere near a finished product. The screenshot doesnt do it justice, the elements all line up in the live version, i just couldnt find a program to grab the screen. I will upload tommorrow so people have a better idea Thanks for comments
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