i would like some feedback on my portfolio that i have (almost) finished creating.

 

http://jamesportfolio.comoj.com/

 

i know there is a spelling mistake on the banner under contact but i lost the pdf file to edit it there for requires me making a new one lol

 

so please post what you think guyes

Hi James, I do like some parts of the site like the footer, but it took a very long time to load (several minutes) so I would cut out parts which are taking up a lot of bandwidth.

good start so far but i think it needs more work (sorry )

 

1)each page seems to open to a new page. That annoys ppl like me.

2)James Portfolio text needs to be more pronounce. It looks almost like a background and is therefore lost. I assume u want this to be more prominant?

3)Contact form looks very basic and isnt layout with any thought. There is also a lot of white space which makes it look empty and unfinised.

4)The service page doesnt work for me either. It looks too basic and unprofessional. I think u need to lay it out more interstingly and attractively.

5)About me seems to be empty?

6)Like the portfolio page. Nice and cleam/simple to use.

7)Ya site, ya brand, seems very cluttered and gives the impresson of austerity (might have spelt that wrong--I mean poor looking). If this is the look ya going for then great. If not, ...sorry. I'm jsut thinking that ya customer will look at it and not get a sense of a professional service (even though u clearly can do good site e.g. call of duty looks great).

 

Hope this helps