Hi everyone! I am totally new to website making and used websiteX5 to make mine...I'm looking for some feedback be it good or bad

 

thanks for looking !

 

http://zoriacreations.co.uk/

here's some things that i think would help sell your products more effectively

 

text is too large, quite large is good but that is too large

 

don't use all italics

 

split it up into short paragraphs

 

don't bother disabling right click: it's an accessibility issue and is useless at preventing image theft

 

the header looks a bit dated - if i have time i could work something up for you based around that idea?7

also the gradients on the background images make the red look washed out...

 

button text is too small (i am being picky aren't i at least for the top level ones, the bold one are ok.

 

also those buttons look quite dated (sorry but i'm being critical but i want to help i would consider using css menu with 'buttons' made with real text and a background.

 

what are the specks on the black top on the front page? if you need help getting rid of those email me the original image and i'll do it for you

 

some thumbnails (small images) of the products in the gallery would be good rather than having to flick through all of them, something like lightbox http://www.huddletogether.com/projects/lightbox2/ for example

 

what's an "Anklet" ? lol

 

i would be tempted to make your product images bigger - or crop them to show more of the necklace

e.g. Turquoise and agate necklace on http://zoriacreations.co.uk/turquoise_and_agate_necklace.html

 

you have some nice looking jewellery! and with a little polish your site could soon be showing it off to its full potential.

 

if you like, and if i find time over the next few days, i can show some ideas that i've outlined above

 

p.s. i forgot to add that splash/entry pages are a waste of time - just use the homepage as the first page for the site