Hey i have designed a logo for a driving range.

 

May you please give feedback on what you think should be improved as it feel something is missing.

 

Thanks

 

What about a trace of the end of the club and perhaps something below the feet of the golfer suggesting a fairway.

Yea the gradient isnt part of the logo but i like the fairway idea..

What about a trace of the end of the club and perhaps something below the feet of the golfer suggesting a fairway.

 

 

Is this better in your opinion?

Hmmm. Although, perhaps it is me, who has a perverted imagination ...

Hmmm. Although, perhaps it is me, who has a perverted imagination ...

 

Now you mention it, I see it too.

i dont see it!

The writing is un-readable when the image is small, which I guess is necessary quite often.

Personally i think the writing is unnecessary so i am considering removing it