Hi,

 

Just found the forum, great resource.

 

Just launched my first real web project!

 

http://www.bedroom-beats.com

 

Feedback Wanted

 

Cheers

Ben

Wow that looks really cool! Love it.

 

If I were to change one thing it would be add some line-height (around 1.5em) to your text so it's not so close together

Hmm interesting point, are you running mac or PC?

 

What would the CSS code be:

 

line-height: xx; ??

Pretty nice website, yeah the code is line-height:20px; for example.

 

One thing I will say is that it's very pixelated around the edges of the polaroids, you should re-do them so they're of higher quality.

I like it too but would second that the polaroids are abit jaggy. just need abit of anitalising and itl look fine.

Love the background image. I agree with the others' comments about the edges.

 

Is the white maybe a bit strong on the black? Maybe it's just me, so don't worry.. maybe a slightly light grey colour?

 

Overall, good job, I like it

Hmm thanks for the feedback guys - just what I wanted.

 

Im running on a mac and can see no jagged edges - is there a way I can change the polaroid layer in PhotoShop to correct this error?

 

Thanks Again!

now i got to say im loving this site! very good looking! yeah i can see the jagged lines aswell running windows xp with FF 3.5 beta 4

 

(also the rizla packet is a real nice touch didn't notice it first time i looked!)

Cheers glad you like the site, I am trying to set up as a freelance designer but I'm struggling to get any work.

 

This has been my first real project though and has taught me a CMS which is nice.

 

Need to sort that jagged bit ont he photo looks awful just checked on a PC!

Yeah, you could make your text #eee not #fff, might soften it a little. And I second the thought of increasing line-height a little, and I'd also suggest giving the text panels a little inner padding so the text doesn't get quite so close to the edge. But overall it's v cool. Loving the rizla packet - noticed you used the blue packet

Love it. Very nice.

 

...Loving the rizla packet - noticed you used the blue packet

 

Could have been more blatant Andy, he could have used slim Silvers.... Not that I know anything about that of course!

Thanks again for your input guys.

 

What would #eee be an off white?

 

I have tried it and couldn't tell much difference on my mac screen!

 

Thanks Again

Yeah, eee is a kind of cream rather than white

#eee should be very, very pale grey (pure grey, no tint at all). If you can't see the difference, try #ddd. In fact just try stuff until you get something you like. Numbers aren't everything

That is really great, I love the background. Is that a packet of Rizla I see? Haha

That is really great, I love the background. Is that a packet of Rizla I see? Haha

 

always amazes me how a packet of rizla can connect people in such a way, i don't think i've met a designer who doesn't have a packet of rizla on them

Ha ha, nice touch isnt it!

 

Thanks