May 12, 200917 yr Hello, I am wondering if you could take a look at this "draft" of a site I am working on for an existing client. With this particular client, I am providing them with a complete rebranding package. They require business cards, letter heads, compliment slips, corporate folders, large format exhibitation stands and popup banners and ofcourse a website. We will also be printing the media for the client. Thanks, Matt Billyboard Marketing
May 12, 200917 yr It's not BAD, but it could do with quite a bit of tightening up. Try putting some more white space around the top and left of your body copy. Also shrink the line length on that copy so it is a bit narrower. Align your phone number with your logo vertically. Give the image at the bottom a bit more space on the left hand side and make sure that the final image in the sequence doesn't get cut off in the way it does at the moment. Nice start, just needs to be tweaked a bit
May 12, 200917 yr 1: "Call Us On" should be "Call us on" or just "Call us:" 2: Iiiiih, get claustrophobic with that image 3: Although the text on the right side of the image is quite large, I had a very fuzzy picture of what you were up to. Too many buzzwords and the marketingtype "Let's just pretend we can help everyone"
May 12, 200917 yr Hi there. I like what you've done but there are a few things I would change. I would take half of the people at the bottom and put them on the right. like this... Ive just played about with it in photoshop. obviously the text would need re-doing The blue logo that ive removed just had the same text that youve got over the image. Not sure you can really repeat it too much. just some ideas, have a play and do what you think looks best. James.
May 12, 200917 yr Author Thank you for your comments, all your help is much appreciated. We are mainly both a printing and marketing specialist, however due to heavy demand from our existing client base we made the decision to offer a web design service. With this site, we will be developing many different systems, one for recruitment where people can save their details and be automatically recommended for vacancies and also the client will be able to add, edit and remove job vacancies. Within the near future we will also be developing a fully operational logistics centre, where people can place and track orders. Once again, thanks for your help. I have taken all comments and will make some adjustments when I am back at the office in the morning! Kind Regards, Matt
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