Just started to redesign one of my sites and just after some feedback on it before I do any more on it.

 

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Looks nice i think.

Maby you can use another picture of a deer because now it looks to me like he is dieing

And the text if you want to advertise call use isnt really visible maby put it on another place.

 

Goodluck

 

Raoul de Boer

It's an okay design. The elements of the webpage are pretty plain; there's nothing special about it. Also, I would add some headers to the text on the page. It's looks weird to just have text right under the banner/header.

I like the choice of colours, but I agree remove the deer it does look like its dieing haha.

 

I would perhaps move the nav to the left instead of having it right on the top, currently it kind of looks just there. I like the graphics you have on the right, possibly make the links like that.

 

Good start though

Looks cool man.

 

If i was you, i would fix a couple of errors you have:

 

You added 2 scripts after the </html> tag.

They should go befre the </body> tag.

 

Also make the bottom corners round, they're not at round at the moment.

(im sure you would do that anywa, but just in case...)

 

So far its a pretty plain design. You know the main header where it says "Forest Advertising"

at the moment it is an image with some dropped shaddow. But the font is too plain man!

 

If youre gonna make the heade as an image you might aswell add a couple of more effects to it.

(but not too much otherwise it ruins it)

 

Id add a slight gradient from FFFFFF to EEEEEE and add a dropped shaddow of dark green, 1px or 2px distance and 0px size.

and give more space between "Business Direcotry..." and "Forest Advertising"

Thanks for the feedback guys. The script after the </html> is because i'm using free hosting to test it on and it adds automatically.

Hi

 

I like the line of the header a lot.

 

The left side just needs sorting and whatever else.

 

Should look super then.

 

Good luck.

Hi Timmo

 

The front image of the forest loads rather slowly here.

 

Oliver

That's because it's on free hosting at the moment once i'm happy with it and it's ready i'll swap it onto my main hosting.

i really like this one.The deer image is very effective and It will be very hard to find something like that.But the deer's face is kinda scary... ( the eyes remind me of a spider..and I'm arachnophobic myself)

The website background is a bit plain.I would change the green bgcolor to a black(top) to green(bottom) gradient.That's what I see now that the sun is shining on my LCD display and unless I stand up looks good .

 

There isn't really much to change.I say you should finish and then worry about these very small problems.

It looks very good. I like it