my website ---> www.willdoyle.co.uk

 

its not 100% finished

 

Im having real problems with content..

 

what would you change?

 

thanks

 

Will

Nice clean, yet colourfull layout, I especially like the way you've displayed your testimonials. The only suggestion I have is that you change

I'm Will, and I'm a web designer in Devon.

to I'm a web designer based in devon.

 

Other than that good job!

are all of the images on the site yours?

are all of the images on the site yours?

 

 

nope..i was just picking some random images...im deleting those images

 

instead of making a new thread.... can anyone find any images that will replace the images on About , Portfoilo , and Contact...I dont want to buy any images

 

thanks

nope..i was just picking some random images...im deleting those images

 

instead of making a new thread.... can anyone find any images that will replace the images on About , Portfoilo , and Contact...I dont want to buy any images

 

thanks

 

 

I am not trying to be rude or anything but... if your a pro graphic designer why not design them your self and use the space to showcase your work?

are my meta tags okay?

I like the look of the site lots - can't help you with free images though (sorry!).

Your meta tags?

Have a read of the latest Copy Corner article (in my sig) see if it helps.

You also need to look at grammar throughout the copy as you're cutting some sentences in half with full stops and not using commas in others which makes it hard to follow. The Copy also sounds a little 'tired' - give it some oomph!

Hi

 

Someone has kindly pointed out its main fault, which is indeed the grammar.

 

Otherwise the website is first class in my opinion.

I'm not a great fan of 'dark' web sites but yours works, looks slick.

 

As to replacing the images, replace them with strong coloured created images to help show case your logo design skills. Keeping it funky means it wont really matter what symbols or shapes they are. We don't all have to have a telephone for 'contact us'!

 

PS you are gonna get a lot of spam problems putting your email on the site, why not use a form?

I think you should change the color on that phone picture on the contact page. It gives me retina burn, and its to intense compared to the rest of the colors on the page.

 

Edit: and its really artifact(ed?) from the jpeg file type.