Hi Adam
Having browsed your CV, I believe you need to read up on websites that explain the structure of a good CV and information you need to include. I might sound harsh but here are the issues I find
- I don't know whose CV this is : You should include your personal details at the top - name, address, contact details, Date of birth etc
- Qualification - Your grades. you need to state what grades you achieved. I would also cut out the GCSE to condense the CV and just put number of GCSE A-C including Maths and English, arts etc. Focus on the main subjects
- Other employment - Unless relevant to the role why would I want to know what you did 10 years or so ago. Stick to the most recent and relevant and go into detail. Are you really doing two jobs whilst being a company director
- You mentioned at the bottom 'You spend a lot of time designing website'. Portfolio please. If you spend a lot of time then you should be able to back this up with links to your work. If I was a employer I would rather see your samples then hearing you say you created them
Hope this helps
Mohammed