Harrison Aguilar

Basically everything Jason said is spot on. Some article writing, link building, on page work are all quite important. As it was said, social media is HUGELY important. Twitter, Facebook, all of it extremely important. If you get people to start liking your page, following you on twitter, retweeting your products, sharing links etc,. you will see your site rank much higher on Google.

First off, the images are all great. I think they look fantastic. The homepage looks good in my opinion. Once you move to the Contact Us page and other pages that have more text I started to question how I felt about the colour of the text. It works, I am just unsure if I think that it is completely ideal. I wish I had a suggestion for a different colour to use, but don't really have one. You can always ignore my suggestion as well!

Not sure if you are aware of this issue. On the homepage at the bottom, with the graphic the text boxes that come onto the screen from the left bounce back and forth. This seems to only happen on the aircraft and tank links.

I would say that about 99% of the time black backgrounds do not work for me. They especially do not work with dark blue font. If you are looking to start from scratch then I would say follow through with that and maybe go for a more pastel colour. Soft colours are more welcoming in my professional opinion. Just play with different colours until you find the one that feels right.

I think "Bomb" has hit most of the important points. You must note that Google is changing their algorithm everyday to eliminate sites they find as spam. Even though your site is obviously not spam, some of the same things you do are what Google sees as "spammy". Listen to "Bomb" and the best of luck.

I prefer this one to your other site. The large drum is a bit too in your face for my personal taste. Also, I think you need to have individual pages. You get lost in the multiple columns. Instead of three columns I'd make 3 pages + a Contact and Homepage. Hope these suggestions help.

I think Jason brought up most of the errors. I just think the Times New Roman font and the mispelling of "Innovitive" (Innovative) on the home page, which needs to grab the viewer forcefully, immediately pushes them away. Your information on the homepage is a bit of a struggle as well. This is where you need to show some professionalism. Saying you can make the site at a cost "WAY" lower... This may be getting critical, but when you are trying to sell yourself be sure to have what you want in mind, and sell around it. Basically I'd say listen to everyone's suggestions, and find some inspiration from other sites out there. Rome wasn't built in a day....Facebook wasn't built in a week... wait... actually it was

I agree the text should be adjusted. On another note, with the navbar, I am a bit confused as to why Buy VIP and Register have colour font and the rest do not. And the two that have colour aren't the same colour. Just seems a bit confusing to me. It seems like either all, none, or every other should have colour. All other suggestions have been made. Congrats on hitting over 2,000 member mark!!

Not sure how I feel about the tennis ghosts peering around the calendar and photo. Is it a haunted tennis club? haha only joking. I do like the idea of something beyond the main focus, which is what I think you were going for there. The only other suggestions I have, had already been mentioned. Based on your claim to it being ugly I was expecting something much worse than this. A few tweaks here and there and I am sure it will be great.

Bravo for teaching yourself HTML. A few notes: The feedback link isn't linking to another page. On a few of the other pages, when you go to them the menu, which was once nicely laid out on the left margin, is now at the top, in basic text and missing anything appealing. The "interviews" page could use a makeover. Also, maybe a lighter text then the grey. It is somewhat straining on the eyes. Keep working at it!

Site is fitting with the purpose of the site. Good to see a creative site with a creative style. I would also love to see the Contact section to be similar to the rest of the nav links. All of the info staying on the left side and not having it center like all of the other information simply gives a lot of empty space and isn't really user-friendly in my opinion. I really like the rest of the site though! Looks great!

Looks like a great site and your projects are good. As others had stated, the color scheme is a bit bland, but just work more on mixing high and low contrasting colors and it should really make a difference. All of the disclaimers you have should be a bit smaller in font in my opinion, or in a more creative look. Other than that, great functioning site!

Looks like a well-functioning site. A bit slow, unfortunately, as mentioned. The nav bar also doesn't seem to fit the theme of the rest of the site and the products that you are offering. It looks a little basic and almost too happy for the rest of the site. Just sticks out as an awkward mood change. Hope this helps!

The site is simple enough to use and somewhat creative. I would keep toying around with the logo but I am okay with the font. The font appeals to who you want it to appeal to I think. Another suggestion would be to have a place under the videos for comments. Other than that, looks good.