Hello

I have created a template which i am planning on releasing as a free download. It's my first real attempt at a css tableless design. I've only done the index and contact page, the other pages are duplicates of the index. I'd like some feedback on it please. Any constructive criticism would be much appreciated. =)

link: http://davhan.com/work/metamorphic-dream/

 

Thank you.

i quite like it...

not too sure on the orange <a> colour tho', isn't too easy on the eye. and i would get rid of the yellow to orange banner.

when i removed the element form my browser the site looked a lot better,

 

 

also on your contact form, when getting an error you are taken to a page with no links on it saying "Use Back - fill in all fields" would be better to have a link back to the form or even better have the form POST to itself.

i quite like it...

not too sure on the orange <a> colour tho', isn't too easy on the eye. and i would get rid of the yellow to orange banner.

when i removed the element form my browser the site looked a lot better,

Hello Gav, Thanks for your reply. I have removed the yelow/orange bar, I'm going to experiement with the colours for my links too.

 

also on your contact form, when getting an error you are taken to a page with no links on it saying "Use Back - fill in all fields" would be better to have a link back to the form or even better have the form POST to itself.

I've updated the error pages, I will add the whole form, but right now it's got a link back to contact.php

 

Thanks.

Link doesn't work for me.

Link doesn't work for me.

Sorry, I have fixed it now.

lol gav and dav, far a minute there i thought you were having a conversation with youself .

 

As for the template. i like you header and the way you did you menu in it. Just seems that the rest needs a little more attenttion. It's all a bit to dull, maybe try using some of you header stuff in your footer.

Also the gradient on the bar below the header and the footer is very extreme. It makes your website look rather old. Try toning it down or removing it all together.

 

Greetz R-J