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Your feedback/review of "my first video", and no, it's not porn!

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I've recently created a PDF download and a supporting video narrative, it's my first ever video so I'd appreciate honest (constructive) feedback.

 

Subject might be too dry for some, but for the rest it's as follows - Search Marketing ROI Toolkit for New Advertisers (PPC)
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Many thanks in advance for taking the time to watch and comment!

At minute 1 you started to waffle about not having a script. This will put people off especially as you have got a whole minute into the video and still not seen anything. Maybe while doing the intro a few basic slides would be good.

 

They always say never address the public without at least key notes, but the reality is you should have a well rehearsed script. Especially for a video that is well over 30 minutes long. Any script you do write will need to be edited by someone else and not yourself.

 

Your stats slides are gone to quick, even at the large font-size people need time to decide to read them while you are talking. You also need to take a short breath and let people read the slides occasionally.

 

I haven't watched the whole video, 30+ minutes is a long time, but I hope these pointers will be useful to you.

 

Personally I hate having to do video's and pay for the services of A.Nother setting them high standards to hit :)

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