Hi there,

 

As you will see from my site - I'm at the starting blocks with web design.

 

If I could get your review and feedback I would be very grateful.

 

Address is http://ukfunbus.co.uk

 

I still got work to complete - just waiting on the client to send me the info.

 

There is content under the summer tour section.

 

Thanks in advance

 

James

Ok, the layout is understandable and you've written it in CSS as oppose to using tables and at times people don't even understand how to do that when they are starting out so good job on that part.

 

Now the banner is pretty bad, I really don't like the font and the colours within it, it looks like something you created as a young kid using play-dough, they really don't go well together. Easy on the gradient as well, subtle gradients look a lot better, try bringing the opacity of it down a bit and you will see what I mean.

 

I'm not sure the font of the navigation bar is that great either. I get it, it's meant to be a fun website and not stick to the usual guidelines (hence the target audience) but you still want to make the company look professional and an activity you would want to undertake.

 

The mailto link will produce a lot of Spam, try creating a form in PHP, I find users like that option as well as an e-mail address, a lot prefer it in fact.

 

The footer font is also unreadable, try at least putting it into an easy to read font Arial, Verdana, Helvetica etc.

 

It's a good basis, just needs to be improved. Good luck.

 

Now the banner is pretty bad, I really don't like the font and the colours within it, it looks like something you created as a young kid using play-dough, they really don't go well together. Easy on the gradient as well, subtle gradients look a lot better, try bringing the opacity of it down a bit and you will see what I mean.

 

I'm not sure the font of the navigation bar is that great either. I get it, it's meant to be a fun website and not stick to the usual guidelines (hence the target audience) but you still want to make the company look professional and an activity you would want to undertake.

 

 

I don't like also the Banner! I understand that you want to attract people,but with what you do in the fonts,colors around it,it may attract at first but staying longer I doubt it.

 

I'll take note of what ash89 said,they're pretty good tips!!!