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I have made a website in the last day or so.

 

http://www.shivampaw.ml

 

It is a one page website and I have tried to make it mobile and tablet friendly. I've previously used frameworks such as bootstrap but this is the first site I've coded from scratch so I was wandering if anyone has some feedback and ways for me to improve.

 

Mainly talking about the design because the content is just yeah..

 

 

Thanks!

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It's good for a beginner website.

 

I think you should not have a photo of yourself if you are going to hide your face.

 

Also try to be consistent with your choice of fonts.

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are you wanted? (i mean by the police, not employers or proespective mates) ? :)

 

if you have a left aligned section then left align the heading too - don't leave it floating in an abyss in the centre. more padding around the pictures would help let them breathe whilst still remaing connected to the text. why the huge line height? basically speaking around 1.2–1.6 is a good rule of thum, though it depends on the line length and font etc. a touch more white space above your drop shadows would be nicer

 

your form is quite wide on desktop - i would set a max width on it

 

not bad at all though otherwise! and good to see it's responsive.

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are you wanted? (i mean by the police, not employers or proespective mates) ? :)

 

if you have a left aligned section then left align the heading too - don't leave it floating in an abyss in the centre. more padding around the pictures would help let them breathe whilst still remaing connected to the text. why the huge line height? basically speaking around 1.2–1.6 is a good rule of thum, though it depends on the line length and font etc. a touch more white space above your drop shadows would be nicer

 

your form is quite wide on desktop - i would set a max width on it

 

not bad at all though otherwise! and good to see it's responsive.

 

Thanks! Nah I just don't like showing my face :p

 

So should I right align Disease Free World

and left align Prima Healthcare?

 

The line height is high because it just goes well with the font (as the font size is quite big to improve readability.

 

I'll add the padding to the images and also set a max-width of 600px for the form.

Thanks!

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