http://mytestpages.110mb.com/test/template1/index.html

There's not really a lot to go on at the moment... The page looks very broken,with no real structure to it. Layout wise I can see where you're going, though. Maybe post once it's more together

 

BenTheDesigner

Maybe post once it's more together

 

I agree with ben. Also improve your padding here and there (including your navigation). And use a more contrasting colour for some of your text. Black on dark grey is hard on the eyes.