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#1 5nake

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Posted 15 April 2017 - 09:34 PM

Hi.

This is my first website don't be too hard with me. I'm posting it here because I wanna know your opinion to improve.

 

Web Site - http://ecodews.com

Youtube Video - https://www.youtube....h?v=rVzj863ksfs

 

I'm planing to improve it and make available for download.

Its created by html, css, php, little bit javascript this is my week part

 

Thanks

Elvis

 

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#2 Nillervision

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Posted 15 April 2017 - 10:38 PM

Hello Elvis :D

Welcome to WDF.

Here are some suggestions for improvements:

 

Serious markup errors.

  • You have no doctype declaration
  • You have no <html> element
  • You have an (extra) <head> element in the end of the body element.
  • Your first <head> element (you can only have one) is missing a (very important) title tag
  • Your home page has 4 <h1> elements. A page should only have one top level heading

 

CSS

  • You are mostly using IDs as CSS selectors, that is bad practice and makes it imposible to reuse any styles
  • I understand that you are working on the page now, but when you are done try to minify your CSS and merge it into a single file for better performance.

JS

  • You have some blocking script tags in your (first) head element, try to move them down to before the closing body tag so the browser can load and start to render the content while the scripts are loading.
  • Use a minified version of jQuery instead
  • I get that you are using the CKEditor WYSIWYG for the backend but why on earth would you have your visitors load the ckeditor script when they are on the front end?

Edited by Nillervision, 15 April 2017 - 10:44 PM.


#3 dap

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Posted 16 April 2017 - 06:03 AM

get a native English speaker to proofread it too :)







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