[turncoat]

http://pluscommission.com/

Basically, I need you to look over the design. Something is not right with it... Just can't put my finger on it.

Be brutal. I don't mind. Everything will help so do say whatever you think of it.

I need some help with it. Thanks.

[Truls]

I quite like the design. It's clean and good looking, and I also like the colors you've been using

But as you say yourself, something is missing. To me, there might not be enough going on and the design might be a little bit to plain, and perhaps missing some elements to make the whole design more exciting. Perhaps you could try adding some more graphic elements or throw in some more colors. It could be anything from having the icons in colors to trying out different backgrounds.

[Chosen]

The footer and top right navi are horrible. Just plain horrible. Also log in box should be in sync with the lower box.. Other than that - Great design!

As in you're missing something? Spot on. It's too /LOW/. Stretch the page longer. Add more empty selling content.

This post has been edited by Chosen: 22 January 2012 - 03:07 PM

[jonamar]

To be honest I don't find anything horrible.
It looks simple and clean, like it should.

It's a good design if you ask me.

[Malyo]

Hello

So:

• First and most important thing, WEB DESIGN and TEXT JUSTIFY doesn't go well together (in 99% cases)
  
• 2 menus on the top shoud be aligned verticaly (move lower to the right)
  
• shadows look unnatural (you know bottom shadow with top shadow under him looks like a weird light composition), imo stick to one direction shadow (let's say bottom with sides)
  
• Mini column content text should be spread through whole column
  
• Resgister now buttons - have you tried aligning them to right?
  
• Overall the site is quite clean and estetic, but i would work more on the top content box, it kinda lacks of expression if you know what i mean, altho im not sure if this is the best place for login box

Hope that helped

[turncoat]

Thanks. That really did. Thanks for going through specifics. Appreciate your time.

[MikeChipshop]

Major problem is nothing lines up properly. You need to look at using a decent grid system when putting the design together in the first place.
Drop the text justify, it's not designed for screen use.
Tone down the drop shadows.