[tomwhite982]

Hello i would be much oblige if you were to review my three websites,THANKS FOR YOUR TIME

www.surreysoundhire.com

www.chaps-pa.co.uk

audiohire-london.co.uk

Is the site attractive to you? Why/why not?
Is it easy to use? Can you find what you're looking for?
Do you understand what the site is about?
If this site is offering a product or service, would you sign up or buy it?
If you were interested in this site's content, would you come back? Why/why not? If the site has a forum community, would you sign up and post? Why/why not?
Is the content good? Do you understand what the text is saying? Do you notice any spelling/grammar mistakes?

THANKS

TOM

[zed]

Have they changed since you last asked?

[tomwhite982]

yes they have changed

thanks
Tom

[OwenONeill]

There all almost exactly the same?.. is that on purpose?

Think you've got a long way to go personally, it seems all very crammed and a bit dated to be honest, and frankly it almost looks like you have put zero effort into the little bits that make a website so appealing.

Starting off with your images, having the original white borders like you've just copied it into photoshop and saved as a jpeg, is not really a good look, and the aesthetics of your navigation bar, in my opinion it reflects hardly any good design techniques what so ever.

I'm going to have to go with this being either an extremely rushed site, or your on a learning curve, but my advise, take your time in whatever you do and think rationally.

Look at other sites that you like and take inspiration.

This post has been edited by OwenONeill: 13 January 2012 - 01:23 PM

[Ben Evans]

They are okay, not perfect, very old school, but I think they will work well as long as you get the SEO right. I have seen a lot worse out there.