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#1 User is offline   JackDanielTracy 

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Posted 08 January 2012 - 01:30 AM

Hello,

Over the past couple of days I've been uploading parts of my website to be revewed... This is the final one i promise!:)

the link is.. www.hampshiredofeyouthforum.co.uk

I'm still currently trying to figure out a good way to display the signup box for news letter! so any suggestions please say.

Thanks for everyones support here!

Before i get riped, the website is using a template!
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Posted 08 January 2012 - 02:59 AM

The site looks pretty cool, the first thing that struck me though was the lengthy web address which is pretty unmemorable and kinda hard to read.

Apart from that the grass on the header creeps over the main content div (dunno if its intentional but it creeps under the home button and looks a bit tatty.)

Finally I wouldn't have the video automatically play on opening the webpage but thats just me. Other than that good job.

this is all on chrome btw
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Posted 09 January 2012 - 04:09 PM

Hi,

This looks great. Likewise don't autoplay the video, but that's personal preference. Love the Twitter sidebar widget and also the tag cloud. Like you say, the newsletter bit needs improvement - but maybe focus on what's in the newsletter and market that rather than just saying, this is your 'bog standard newsletter'. If the newsletter is about joining up DoE then maybe something like 'Ready to Change Your Life?' (ok maybe not as cheesy) instead of 'Monthly Newsletter' then change the wording to bullet points of the features of the newsletter

Great work, love the design. Looks excellent in firefox.

Simon
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Posted 11 January 2012 - 01:54 PM

The site looks good overall, but there's something about typography i don't like. Icons would be great heading enchancment.
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