[alzer81]

Just noticed that this forum doesnt have somewhere to through up a sneak peak of your latest work. I have seen it on many other forums and find it dead handy to show off your latest work, even if its only something small. it gives people the chance to get some criticism or praise on there latest work! We should use this especially cos this forum has the 'attach a file' option which is dead handy!

here is a quick iphone compettion page i did up. (only took me bout an hour)

Lets see what your doing!

[Circles]

Nice work, as ever

I'd be embarrassed to post anything I'm working on after that

[alzer81]

come on, no one gonna judge. its a thread purely to show off what your working on! stuff ur proud of etc!

[alzer81]

another little landing page im working on:

[. Jordan .]

Not started yet because I'm busy with college work but I mocked this up a bit ago. Just a redesign for an image hosting script I made a while back.

[alzer81]

starting a flash ad for the iphone page above. will post the final flash ad later is ya's are interested

[welshhuw]

Here'a a freebie im doing for a family member.

It's gonna be a WordPress CMS style site.

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[alzer81]

welshhuw, on 01 September 2010 - 12:27 PM, said:

Here'a a freebie im doing for a family member.

It's gonna be a WordPress CMS style site.

very nice!

[welshhuw]

Thanks...

Anyone got any other to share....?!

[welshhuw]

alzer81, on 30 August 2010 - 02:50 PM, said:

Just noticed that this forum doesnt have somewhere to through up a sneak peak of your latest work. I have seen it on many other forums and find it dead handy to show off your latest work, even if its only something small. it gives people the chance to get some criticism or praise on there latest work! We should use this especially cos this forum has the 'attach a file' option which is dead handy!

here is a quick iphone compettion page i did up. (only took me bout an hour)

Lets see what your doing!

I like it...one thing I spotted (not sure if its just due to you saving out of PS?) but on the left, next to the iPhone..the white border seems to go out of line...

But I like the design very much, nice!

[alzer81]

well spotted i spotted too before i built it. here's the final page:
iphone
am still workin on the flash file to accompany it

[bocaj]

alzer81, on 01 September 2010 - 02:46 PM, said:

well spotted i spotted too before i built it. here's the final page:
iphone
am still workin on the flash file to accompany it

I hope you're going to spell check it

Very slick though.

[alzer81]

haha its not my job to spell check

[alzer81]

et viola!

iPhone Flash ad

[stjohn]

lovely stuff all round. the attention to detail on all the edging and shadows etc, is awesome.
I will be investigating further

this just went semi-Live. for a friend I went to college with:
laurakilty.ie

Its the first time integrating Wordpress into a site, so im happy I got over the inital hump of CMS's. I was kinda scared of them because im crap at php (something i have to change) but this was pretty harmless so far.
anyway, I still have to get some more style into all sections, so let me know if anything pops into your head.
thanks.

[alzer81]

stjohn, on 01 September 2010 - 10:22 PM, said:

detail on all the edging and shadows etc, is awesome. I will be investigating further

its mine! u cant rob it!!!

here is a site i did about 5 months ago but was waiting on copy to finish it. finally putting it in....im not really that happy with it but cos i got paid 5 months ago for it, im kinda no bothered with sortin it out! mainly the banner isnt very user friendly but im not pushed....it'll do!

SiTe

[stjohn]

hehe i remember this one actually. very slick. all the little bells and whistles really make a difference.
cant really say much else, its deadly!!.

[PJM Media]

One of my latest creations is

www.jmar.co.uk

No changes will be made now but your opinion on my work would be good If possible I would also like you to give an estimate of what you think you would charge to make the same/similar? Ballpark figures obviously.

[Circles]

stjohn, on 01 September 2010 - 10:22 PM, said:

the attention to detail on all the edging and shadows etc, is awesome.

Agreed. My attention to detail could use some improvement

Huw, I like your pencil, brush and ruler set

Here's my current attempt. I think it's pretty bland at the moment, and I'm not happy with the logo, its arrangement seems to overwhelm the page.. Needs a bit of excitement on the left hand side, too.

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[PJM Media]

Circles,

How about having either a static image below your buttons the width of the 2 columns or a slider (in the same place)?

[Circles]

PJM Media, on 02 September 2010 - 11:19 AM, said:

Circles,

How about having either a static image below your buttons the width of the 2 columns or a slider (in the same place)?

It's a nice idea, and I would agree with you, but unfortunately I can only work with the content supplied, which doesn't include any images

I'd love to add some sort of graphic on the left hand side, like I said, but I'm afraid of going overboard with the pink :\

[alzer81]

a 20 minute jobby for my girlfriend

[PJM Media]

I would agree on the 'Pink' point. I think there is a little to much of it but also I think there is too much text which make the 'Pink' factor stand out more than it normally would.

How about on the left hand side below the video, stopping the text at 'services.' rather than 'services via etc etc'. I would imagine all this information is listed on the services page anyway plus id guess the video makes reference to the services as well.

With regards the right hand side how about making the text more concise?

[Circles]

Will definitely have a think about shortening the blurb, thanks for the advice on that

I might also consider another colour for the highlighted text, if I can find one that compliments...hmm..

[stjohn]

yea I would have to agree that there is a bit too much text. especially for the homepage.
Everything looking nice though.

here is something I just mocked up. the menu needs some work. id appreciate any feedback thanks.

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[alzer81]

lookin good stjohn. i'd maybe move the 2 panels on the right together and maybe square them off to align them with the image. It needs some edge so maybe intoduce some shading to selected areas. take each panel, peice by peice and try co ordinate each with similar shading to ensure there is a consistancy. you have a nice structure, nows the time to start building it up!

[PJM Media]

Stjohn,

I think its a good start but could be developed (as i am sure you are aware) much further. One point I would say is the middle section of the page "sound set" is giving the immediate impression it is off-center due to the colour differences. What I would suggest is put music at the bottom of the center section.

[stjohn]

cheers guys. very helpful.
@alzer that worked very nicely thanks.
@PJM, so do you mean actual music, like an audio widget or something?

thanks for the help. im meeting the client in a bit just to go over the ideas, so i may post up some updates later.

[PJM Media]

O no no. I thought you had a column on music but I see now its recent posts and archive. What about rather than having them down the side, have them along the bottom?

[Enthused]

Pen e-commerce website.

Work in progress......

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[Enthused]

alzer81, on 02 September 2010 - 11:36 AM, said:

a 20 minute jobby for my girlfriend

Good for 20 mins work!

[Matt Maclennan]

Great idea to start this thread!

My latest piece of work was/"had to be" done in a day (the client was a right...)

So a bit rushed, but here it is!

Artistic Florist Gravesend

Critique please!

[alzer81]

here is a site i am designin, well did it a week ago am waitin on hearin back on it. the structure of the site is a template so just reskinning it for our company. had to do the logo too. its a spread betting company. did the logo in the design of a graph which ties in with the F... suprising only took about 20 mins to do the logo and went on from there with the colour scheme.

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[alzer81]

Matt Maclennan, on 03 September 2010 - 11:25 AM, said:

Great idea to start this thread!

My latest piece of work was/"had to be" done in a day (the client was a right...)

So a bit rushed, but here it is!

Artistic Florist Gravesend

Critique please!

not bad for a days work! the typography of the site is poor though. there is no real structure to it. good for a days work though!

[Matt Maclennan]

alzer81, on 03 September 2010 - 11:35 AM, said:

not bad for a days work! the typography of the site is poor though. there is no real structure to it. good for a days work though!

Thanks! I know, maybe if they fork out some more cash then I might tweak around with it more

[alzer81]

same as my landing page posted a few posts above, this is pointing towards slot games.

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[terydinho]

Just finished working on: Linky Linky

Thoughts?

This post has been edited by terydinho: 03 September 2010 - 02:12 PM

[waynede]

Not currently working on anything awaiting content for website and have no freelance work as never done any before

Terydinho's Site
Now I really want some melted chocolate!

This post has been edited by terydinho: 30 September 2010 - 09:49 PM

[alzer81]

terydinho, on 03 September 2010 - 02:07 PM, said:

Just finished working on: Linky Linky

Thoughts?

very nice mate! its slick and all very clean. my only thing to say maybe would have been perhaps to colour the headings to introduce some colour? its quite colourless bar the images. also maybe put a link to index on the logo. its usually something people click on when tryin to find the homepage. well done son!

[terydinho]

Yeah I see your point about the lack of colour Al, but that was actually very deliberate in an attempt to make the products the core, number one focus of the site. My fave part id the products carousel - so nice and i'm really very proud of it