[QPRLeo]

instinctcricket.co.uk is my latest website but I feel it is let down by the copy I have written.

I contacted Wizely and asked about his copywriting services but unfortunatly hes booked up till April...he must be good!

Just wondered if any WDF'ers could help me to do it myself? Im looking to try and maintain a conversational tone, whilst key search terms being handmade cricket bat and cricket bats london


Thanks

[QPRLeo]

Made a start....
"Huge edges. Modern Shaping. Unrivalled performance. individually handcrafted and pressed, we ensure each piece of willow reaches its potential.

...

Tame even the fiercest bowlers, find even the largest boundaries, reach levels you though could never be reached… unleash your Instinct! "
Any good?

[charliesaidthat]

have pm'd you.