Web Design Forum: My site so far - Web Design Forum

Jump to content

WDF
WDF Premium Memberships Reseller Hosting
Page 1 of 1
  • You cannot start a new topic
  • You cannot reply to this topic

My site so far what do you think? Rate Topic: -----

#1 User is offline   Dave_Webb 

  • Dedicated Member
  • PipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 247
  • Joined: 18-May 08
  • Reputation: 1
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:London UK
  • Experience:Advanced
  • Area of Expertise:Entrepreneur

  Posted 04 January 2009 - 12:26 AM

index
Sub page

The site is not finnished yet. The big white space on in the sub page is where some content will go. On the subpage the links will have hovers.
What do you think? I think theres somthing not right with the subpage and I might just ditch the whole sub page. Maybe its got too much colour. Im not sure, anyone got an idead?

Thanks WDF
0

#2 User is offline   Dave_Webb 

  • Dedicated Member
  • PipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 247
  • Joined: 18-May 08
  • Reputation: 1
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:London UK
  • Experience:Advanced
  • Area of Expertise:Entrepreneur

Posted 04 January 2009 - 12:29 AM

btw i know the nav bar and link icons dont work. Im just sorting the design out before I code it.
:)
0

#3 User is offline   Ren 

  • Dedicated Member
  • PipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 177
  • Joined: 14-December 08
  • Reputation: 2
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:London, UK
  • Experience:Intermediate
  • Area of Expertise:Designer/Coder

Posted 04 January 2009 - 02:45 PM

Hi Dave,

The colours are okay, although I get the feeling that I've already come across a page similar to this already?! For the subpage, I can't really find anything missing (except for the links, plus I'm sure that others will be able to fill in the blanks) perhaps the list of packages, emails, hosting and management can go into a column of it's own and be held on the same level as the left navigation (but for the right-hand side).

That's all I can really say at the moment, not that good at these type of things but I'm working on it.

Nonetheless, keep up the hard work :good:

- Ren
0

#4 User is offline   neilp 

  • Expert
  • PipPipPipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 695
  • Joined: 03-January 09
  • Reputation: 46
  • Gender:Male
  • Experience:Advanced
  • Area of Expertise:Designer/Coder

Posted 04 January 2009 - 03:15 PM

I think you have the colors spot on. I would, perhaps place a small version of the globe, somewhere on the logo? Like the image logo i have attached.

Other then that, great stuff!

Attached File(s)

  • Attached File  mond.zip (6.7K)
    Number of downloads: 4

0

#5 User is offline   Dave_Webb 

  • Dedicated Member
  • PipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 247
  • Joined: 18-May 08
  • Reputation: 1
  • Gender:Male
  • Location:London UK
  • Experience:Advanced
  • Area of Expertise:Entrepreneur

Posted 04 January 2009 - 07:07 PM

Thanks Ren, btw you have probably seen those colours before from when I posted my site here before for a review.

&

Thanks neilp for you comment and especially for the logo. I have tried many times to put the globe into our logo but i'v never managed to do it, so thanks for you idea.
0

#6 User is offline   Guezala 

  • Not an expert, just talk a lot...
  • PipPipPipPipPip
  • Group: Members
  • Posts: 1,504
  • Joined: 28-August 08
  • Reputation: 11
  • Gender:Female
  • Location:Midlands
  • Experience:Intermediate
  • Area of Expertise:Web Designer

Posted 04 January 2009 - 07:18 PM

Hey

It all looks very clean. I have to say I'm not sure about the colours..the green is quite dull compared to the turquoise (for me) ... i think it's the turquoise is just a bit too bright but you could try playing with the green too? On the index page you have part of your sub headings in red....I'm not sure that works. Maybe you should make the whole of it red?

I think it is also worth you trying to be consistent with your fonts .... you appear to have a bit of comic sans in there still which does not look good with the other font. There do seem to be more than a couple of different fonts there.

Finally (sorry), I think your grey text on your index page needs altering as it looks a bit 'squished' together.

Other than these things, it is like i said clean and calming.

Good luck :)

PS You refer to W3 and say you love validator...but neither validate :(
0

Share this topic:


Page 1 of 1
  • You cannot start a new topic
  • You cannot reply to this topic

1 User(s) are reading this topic
0 members, 1 guests, 0 anonymous users