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#1 User is offline   Dave_Webb 

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Posted 27 December 2008 - 06:33 PM

Hi WDF

After having my index page reviewed on here a while ago (and everyone seemed to like it) I have created my sub page.

So please tell me what you think.
Please also feedback on the index page if you wish.

There are 2 options for the sub page. I dont know which one to pick.
Sub page option 1
Sub page 2

new index page

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Posted 27 December 2008 - 07:32 PM

very clean and nice, but the text on your index page is not real text, its on an image... Search engines will think that you don't have any content at all on your index page unless they can see it!
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Posted 27 December 2008 - 07:43 PM

View PostSkysurge, on Dec 27 2008, 19:32, said:

very clean and nice, but the text on your index page is not real text, its on an image... Search engines will think that you don't have any content at all on your index page unless they can see it!


Yer Iv been thinking about this. Im thinking about changing the rollovers to have a div module fade (i think thats what its called).
This way It can be real text whilst keeping the rollover affect.
An example of this is on This Website where it says "Email Us for a Free Quote!" "Call to Discuss It!" "Click to Chat About It!"
Does anyone know how to do this.

btw Thanks for your comment Skysurge
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Posted 27 December 2008 - 09:05 PM

Hi

They are nice, neat, bright and breezy.

Some of these hosting websites actually frighten the eye and would fail the test immediately, because they are a circus of colors/colours.

Keep the scrolling to a minimum and make the Help Section look lively.

Have a great 2009.
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Posted 27 December 2008 - 10:28 PM

View PostPeter000, on Dec 27 2008, 21:05, said:

Hi

They are nice, neat, bright and breezy.

Some of these hosting websites actually frighten the eye and would fail the test immediately, because they are a circus of colors/colours.

Keep the scrolling to a minimum and make the Help Section look lively.

Have a great 2009.


So are you saying that my site are "a circus of colors/colours." or other hosting websites. And do you mean keep pages short to prevent alot of scrolling.
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 02:23 PM

I think Sub page 2 is better.

The white on bright green bg hurts my eyes.
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 07:46 PM

Hi

I am saying that your site is great.

Don't fall into the trap that a lot of these HOSTING COMPANIES use, by using every colour under the sun.

It's termed as non-eye friendly and chases people away.

I hope that helps.
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 07:59 PM

Hi

Sorry I missed your point on scrolling.

If you can keep things down to a minimum and reduce scrolling it is a huge bonus.

Neatness applies that touch.

However, if you think otherwise then that is both your selection and choice.

Good luck and I think your websites look neat as I first said..!!!
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Posted 28 December 2008 - 10:11 PM

View PostPeter000, on Dec 28 2008, 19:59, said:

Hi

Sorry I missed your point on scrolling.

If you can keep things down to a minimum and reduce scrolling it is a huge bonus.

Neatness applies that touch.

However, if you think otherwise then that is both your selection and choice.

Good luck and I think your websites look neat as I first said..!!!


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Posted 28 December 2008 - 10:11 PM

View PostPeter000, on Dec 28 2008, 19:59, said:

Hi

Sorry I missed your point on scrolling.

If you can keep things down to a minimum and reduce scrolling it is a huge bonus.

Neatness applies that touch.

However, if you think otherwise then that is both your selection and choice.

Good luck and I think your websites look neat as I first said..!!!


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Posted 28 December 2008 - 10:13 PM

It's looking pretty good, I like the colours etc, you can tell it's been made in DreamWeaver however, try sorting that out.
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 03:49 AM

View Posttraxor, on Dec 28 2008, 22:13, said:

It's looking pretty good, I like the colours etc, you can tell it's been made in DreamWeaver however, try sorting that out.


How can you tell?
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 11:08 AM

"Untitled Document" as the title of the website, and everything just seems a little out of line and invalid.
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 12:08 PM

http://bancomicsans.com/home.html
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 02:02 PM

View Postcalumbrodie, on Dec 29 2008, 12:08, said:



What does that have to do with anything?
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 02:20 PM

http://mondonet.co.u...ages/index.html

30% off hosting - isn't that comic sans?
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 05:37 PM

Personally I prefer the first sub page, just looks cleaner to me.
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Posted 29 December 2008 - 07:18 PM

View Postcalumbrodie, on Dec 29 2008, 14:20, said:

http://mondonet.co.u...ages/index.html

30% off hosting - isn't that comic sans?


yer i think its comic sans font from adobe photoshop im going to change that anyway, I only put it in there for now.
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